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Alwye

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since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

0 posted 1999-06-16 09:49 PM

A child cries out, lost in the night,
A tiny bird falters and falls from flight.
Emerald eyes glisten from newly shed tears,
And a lost soul looks back on the wasted years.

A family screams out for the loss of their own,
The sun that once shimmered is now barely shown.
Warm, balmy breezes have now turned to ice,
And a once happy life is now not so nice.

A heart once brimming with love is now closed to all,
An invicible being has taken the fall.
Compassion thought to stand for all of time,
Now holds no kind of reason or rhyme.

I once thought my life was easy and bright,
But now upon me is a seeming eternal night.
My soul was alive with you by my side,
But along with you, my heart has died.

I know that I should move on, leave the past behind,
Go forward and seek the hope I need to find.
Yes, I realize this, I know that it is true,
But things just aren't worth it since I lost you.

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*Krista Knutson*

Krystal
Member

since 1999-06-19

Posts 140
Shelton,WA USA

1 posted 1999-06-19 05:42 AM

Sad... powerful. I empathize. Keep up the good work, this is well-written!
-- Krystal (Shannon)

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Shannon D. Montgomery
("Krystal")

Craig
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since 1999-06-10

Posts 444

2 posted 1999-06-19 07:41 AM

Parting written with such sweet sorrow

Well posted Alwye

Elizabeth

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since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

3 posted 1999-06-19 11:24 AM

I know the feeling-I've lost friends for whatever reason and am now in the process of losing another one due to my own stupid actions.

Raven
Member

since 1999-06-14

Posts 67
Hopewell Jct, New York, USA

4 posted 1999-06-20 02:23 PM

I always look forward to reading your poems, I love how you use such magical words in them (emerald eyes), I hope you post many more.

milt
Junior Member

since 1999-06-19

Posts 18
whitley city ky usa

5 posted 1999-06-20 06:17 PM

very powerful,expresses such pain

Alwye

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since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

6 posted 1999-08-13 11:34 PM

Thank you very much!

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*Krista Knutson*

"If I could be an angel, I'd make your every wish come true. But I am only human, just a woman lovin' you..." Trisha Yearwood

Dragoness
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since 1999-08-07

Posts 513

7 posted 1999-08-14 09:01 AM

Beautifully written.Very emotion filled.

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.

Alwye

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Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

8 posted 1999-08-14 02:14 PM

Thank you.

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*Krista Knutson*

"If I could be an angel, I'd make your every wish come true. But I am only human, just a woman lovin' you..." Trisha Yearwood

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