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She Sighed Softly

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RaiN J. CaSteeL
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since 06-16-99
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0 posted 06-16-99 09:29 PM       View Profile for RaiN J. CaSteeL   Email RaiN J. CaSteeL   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RaiN J. CaSteeL

She Sighed Softly....

As the fire flickered
And the clock chimed 7
She sighed softly
As he became her
For a while they laid
Still...
Capturing the moment
Their souls merging
As if it were their last
Time together...
The without a sound
He moved softly
Rhythmically...
Time ceased to exist
As his movements
Became more demanding
And yet still gentle
His eyes glued to hers
His thoughts flowing into her
"I love you"
Said mutually inside
Yet held back...
And then let out
She moaned...
It was as if there was no room
No light outside
As if the world broke away
And left them
There to stay...
She floated higher
Grasping his shoulders
She felt his shivers...
And finally breathing in heaven
And exhaling pleasure
They felt release....
Trembling...
Hearts rapidly beating
Their souls
Dancing happily....

As the fire flickered
The clock chimed 8
She sighed softly
And he became her....

how dew u guys like it?


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As the fire flickered
And the clock chimed 7
She sighed softly
As he became her

Rain J. Casteel
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Poet deVine
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1 posted 06-29-99 11:26 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

TGTBATB

Too
Good
To
Be
At
The
Bottom....

found this and liked it so here we go..up to the top...
WhenDovesCry
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since 06-29-99
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2 posted 06-30-99 01:58 AM       View Profile for WhenDovesCry   Email WhenDovesCry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for WhenDovesCry

wow.....i can see them lying there together....this is so beautiful...
Moonlight
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since 06-25-99
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3 posted 06-30-99 02:30 AM       View Profile for Moonlight   Email Moonlight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Moonlight's Home Page   View IP for Moonlight

I like the style of this...kinda choppy makes the verse seem so.... soft.

~m~
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