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She Sighed Softly
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She Sighed Softly |
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RaiN J. CaSteeL New Member
since 1999-06-16
Posts 4Union, NJ |
She Sighed Softly.... As the fire flickered And the clock chimed 7 She sighed softly As he became her For a while they laid Still... Capturing the moment Their souls merging As if it were their last Time together... The without a sound He moved softly Rhythmically... Time ceased to exist As his movements Became more demanding And yet still gentle His eyes glued to hers His thoughts flowing into her "I love you" Said mutually inside Yet held back... And then let out She moaned... It was as if there was no room No light outside As if the world broke away And left them There to stay... She floated higher Grasping his shoulders She felt his shivers... And finally breathing in heaven And exhaling pleasure They felt release.... Trembling... Hearts rapidly beating Their souls Dancing happily.... As the fire flickered The clock chimed 8 She sighed softly And he became her.... how dew u guys like it? ------------------ As the fire flickered And the clock chimed 7 She sighed softly As he became her Rain J. Casteel |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
TGTBATB Too Good To Be At The Bottom.... found this and liked it so here we go..up to the top... |
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WhenDovesCry Junior Member
since 1999-06-29
Posts 16California, USA |
wow.....i can see them lying there together....this is so beautiful... |
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Moonlight Member
since 1999-06-25
Posts 105Auburn, Alabama USA |
I like the style of this...kinda choppy makes the verse seem so.... soft. ~m~ |
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