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Artur Hawkwing
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25 posted 08-13-99 11:42 PM       View Profile for Artur Hawkwing   Email Artur Hawkwing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artur Hawkwing

Ah Balladeer, you've hit a strong note on this one. You said:

quote:
And be glad we had the chance to be
In love, and loving, tenderly


This is a profound assessment of loving innocently. It would make perfect sense that you can still love as you used to, but with the heart of a child.



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Artur Hawkwing
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26 posted 08-13-99 11:45 PM       View Profile for Artur Hawkwing   Email Artur Hawkwing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artur Hawkwing

I misread the quote I posted above. (edit) but fixed it. I need the practice to help my analyzing skills. Tell me where I go right, or wrong, 'k?



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redwriter1
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27 posted 08-14-99 12:10 AM       View Profile for redwriter1   Email redwriter1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for redwriter1

I should not read late at night.
will post reply later


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Terri
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28 posted 08-14-99 01:22 AM       View Profile for Terri   Email Terri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Terri

::sigh:: You are my idol! Thank you, Bal.
When you were you and I was me
We fit together quite seamlessly
Displaying our love for the world to see
When you were you and I was me.
Deb Lynne
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29 posted 08-19-99 06:53 PM       View Profile for Deb Lynne   Email Deb Lynne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Deb Lynne

Finally a place for the lost souls of poetry!
And to find such talent. The pen is mighty in the hands as such people like yourself. Truly enjoyed this one. Hope to read many more! Beautiful piece.
Nan
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30 posted 08-19-99 07:48 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Did you sneak this one when I wasn't looking, M&M??? Another good'n......
Klassy Lassy
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31 posted 02-14-2006 04:33 AM       View Profile for Klassy Lassy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Klassy Lassy


Sometimes, I wish I coudn't see
the you that's you, the me that's me,
for we are somehow much the same
when life plays its fickle game;
Where echoes sing a distant song
And pine for one who's lost and gone.
I would that joy should erase
all residue and lonely trace
of sadness born of bygone times,
and keep you now in loving climes...
for one you love through endless days
to cherish you in all your ways.

I like to think that the last two lines of this reply are true for you now.  What a talented poet you truly are!  
 
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