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Goodbye (letting go when you want to hold on)

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Travis
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0 posted 06-16-99 12:01 AM       View Profile for Travis   Email Travis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Travis's Home Page   View IP for Travis

Goodbye

What I must do, hurts me so,
I have no choice, not one.
It doesnít matter, how much I love,
Only that, you want youíre fun.

I have waited, and patiently loved,
Hoping that, you would see,
That I love you so, for all time.
So what I do, isnít easy for me.

My heart is breaking, tearing apart,
I try to look away, to let you go.
My dreams, my life, are all about you.
I cry, I weep, I love you so.

I need strength, a miracle,
The courage to accept youíre gone.
I only wish I could find a reason,
To walk away, and move on.

Someday, when our paths cross again,
No matter the time, from here till now.
The tear you see, in my eye,
Is from this day, that I say goodbye.

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amber
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since 06-15-99
Posts 246
los banos, ca,


1 posted 06-16-99 02:51 AM       View Profile for amber   Email amber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amber

i loved your poem, and ive been there before. it hurt to let go of someone when youve spent so much of your soul loving them. i think it was the hardest thing ive ever done. great job on your peom it was beautiful!
Sweet T
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mesa, arizona maricopa


2 posted 07-16-99 02:39 PM       View Profile for Sweet T   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sweet T

OH MY GOD!
I have never really felt a poem as much as I just felt yours. I really think that You should send this poem to survivors. It is an inspirational poem that could help people move on. My friend cried too.
tulip
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since 07-04-99
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3 posted 07-17-99 03:05 AM       View Profile for tulip   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for tulip

I really enjoyed this one, and unfortunatly, relate. Thanks for sharing!
Dragon
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Posts 139
Highmount,NY ,USA


4 posted 07-17-99 03:18 AM       View Profile for Dragon   Email Dragon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dragon

So moving.....
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