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Genea
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0 posted 1999-06-15 10:23 PM


Fairy Children©1999 by Genea Parker

Shy, nimble creatures
At play in the thick forest.
Their sacred games
Unknown to even angels.
Collecting nature's opals -
Dewdrops at dawn.

They whisper softly to the breeze.
A passionate blush
Hints at the fiery orb's potential.
The littlest one pauses in midflight,
Stares at the tattered kite
In the tree, long forgotten
By the boy who pretended to fly.


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Thanks for taking the time to read. Comments welcome! :-)

© Copyright 1999 Genea - All Rights Reserved
Balladeer
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1 posted 1999-06-15 11:57 PM


You have a wonderfully simplistic way of transferring your thoughts to paper. Very enjoyable reading. Thank you.
Poet deVine
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2 posted 1999-06-16 12:00 PM


I believe in fairies!!!! Cute poem!
Genea
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3 posted 1999-06-16 07:36 PM


Balladeer and Poet....thanks for the comments. I always enjoyed fairy tales when i was a child.

~Genea

Raven
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since 1999-06-14
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4 posted 1999-06-16 10:02 PM


I love this poem, I spent many days as a child searching for fairies!


~Raven~

Genea
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5 posted 1999-06-17 02:11 PM


Raven,
Thanks for commenting!
~Genea

Tequilia_Sunrise
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6 posted 2004-07-04 11:20 PM


nicely pened
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