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Margaret
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0 posted 06-15-99 10:03 PM       View Profile for Margaret   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margaret

Reality is that slap in the face
When you think you have the world by the tail
And life seems to be moving at your own pace
When you feel like there is no way you can fail.

Reality is there to open your eyes
When you find you were walking with them closed
And it shows you a site that can make you cry
Because with reality, it shows you what you already know.

Reality keeps me in a state of mind
That I know it has complete control
But sometimes my dreams overtake reality I find
And love lives for a while in my heart and soul

Reality is not fair.
Reality does not care.
© Copyright 1999 Margaret - All Rights Reserved
darkness_witch
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1 posted 02-07-2004 05:31 PM       View Profile for darkness_witch   Email darkness_witch   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for darkness_witch

I dont know if you'll get this or not, but anyway.
I love this poem
love it
as simple as that. This is atrully spcetacular poem. I have just joined piptalk, at the end of 2003 really. But this has been one of the best choices ive made. I feel im on the brink of depression some days, and othgers I feel nothing. But piptalk is always there. Ive come into the archives to see if poetry here has changed, and Im sad to say it has. I am sure I havent seen you round here before, and I fear you may have given up on it. I say plz dont, plz come back and post more of your amazing stuff. I would love to read it.

yours

darkness

You can always hear a tear in Cobain's voice, the pain going on there is always visible through his lyrics - Marilon Manson

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