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amber
Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 240
los banos, ca,

0 posted 1999-06-15 09:31 PM


your voice was so sweet, the sincerist apology,
i had to let you go despite the feelings inside me,
your hand wiped away the tears,
that i never shouldve cried,
finally letting go of my fears,
i have to stop hurting this time,
i loved loving you,
the nights that we shared,
but i always knew,
your heart was never there,
ill miss missing you,
everytime you walk away,
tears in my eyes,
begging you to stay,
i need to stop needing you,
because its breaking my heart,
i love you to much,
to let you tear me apart,
ive given you everything,
but its still not enough,
it hurts to say goodbye,
but i cant live in this onesided love.

© Copyright 1999 amber jean white - All Rights Reserved
Leigh Anne
Junior Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 48
Scottsboro, AL USA
1 posted 1999-06-15 09:53 PM


Been there where you were when you wrote this poem! Very vivid and familiar! Great job!
Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
2 posted 2007-11-13 07:21 PM


Romantic

ARCTIC WIND

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