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sea_of_okc
Senior Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 568
Oklahoma City, OK, USA

0 posted 1999-06-15 03:00 PM


Her eyes are closed, her breath is sweet
I watch her in her sleep
Her hair it spreads in disarray
My love for her runs deep

Her nose is pert, her skin is soft
So perfect to caress
Of all the women on the earth
By far she is the best

Her lips so full, so red, so moist
Made for me to kiss
Her legs are strong, her fingers long
Her hands on me is bliss

Her curves so sleek, her body tight
The taste of her is wine
She brings to me such happiness
I can't believe she's mine

Her waist is slim, her stomach flat
As perfect as can be
I lie awake the whole night through
And hold her close to me

She slowly stirs beneath the sheets
I watch her in her sleep
She wakes up and looks at me
My love for her runs deep

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Steven Seaman

© Copyright 1999 Steven Thomas Seaman - All Rights Reserved
Genea
Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 321
USA
1 posted 1999-06-27 01:24 PM


When i began reading this, i thought it was about a child sleeping, but then it got more erotic, and i realized it was not. Great poem tho.
elvira
Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936
California
2 posted 1999-07-19 02:07 AM


sounds like you found the (physically only?) perfect woman indeed

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Childhood Memories...your countenance...hoarse whispers...My One and Only...Tribute to M.J... serving wench...stolen hours...devotion...Master...apart...



swilke1
New Member
since 1999-07-19
Posts 5
Metamora,IL,USA
3 posted 1999-07-19 02:36 AM


you have captured a lot of thoughts and feelings I have. I know the place, I go there all the time. She must too be a great woman.
great peom!

Sally S.
Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847
Ohio
4 posted 1999-07-20 12:18 PM


I missed this one before....sigh. It's very touching. Lucky girl! (oh....and lucky you too)

seaslady
Junior Member
since 1999-06-25
Posts 43

5 posted 1999-08-07 02:13 PM


Yes sea... she is a lucky girl... I hope she appreciates your words...
Sue
Member
since 1999-08-04
Posts 383
France
6 posted 1999-08-07 02:16 PM


A very lucky girl, to have someone feel like that about her and be able to express it so beautifully.

[This message has been edited by Sue (edited 08-07-99).]

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