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In Her Sleep

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sea_of_okc
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0 posted 06-15-99 03:00 PM       View Profile for sea_of_okc   Email sea_of_okc   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for sea_of_okc

Her eyes are closed, her breath is sweet
I watch her in her sleep
Her hair it spreads in disarray
My love for her runs deep

Her nose is pert, her skin is soft
So perfect to caress
Of all the women on the earth
By far she is the best

Her lips so full, so red, so moist
Made for me to kiss
Her legs are strong, her fingers long
Her hands on me is bliss

Her curves so sleek, her body tight
The taste of her is wine
She brings to me such happiness
I can't believe she's mine

Her waist is slim, her stomach flat
As perfect as can be
I lie awake the whole night through
And hold her close to me

She slowly stirs beneath the sheets
I watch her in her sleep
She wakes up and looks at me
My love for her runs deep

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Steven Seaman
© Copyright 1999 Steven Thomas Seaman - All Rights Reserved
Genea
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1 posted 06-27-99 01:24 PM       View Profile for Genea   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Genea

When i began reading this, i thought it was about a child sleeping, but then it got more erotic, and i realized it was not. Great poem tho.
elvira
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2 posted 07-19-99 02:07 AM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elvira

sounds like you found the (physically only?) perfect woman indeed

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Childhood Memories...your countenance...hoarse whispers...My One and Only...Tribute to M.J... serving wench...stolen hours...devotion...Master...apart...


swilke1
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Metamora,IL,USA


3 posted 07-19-99 02:36 AM       View Profile for swilke1   Email swilke1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for swilke1

you have captured a lot of thoughts and feelings I have. I know the place, I go there all the time. She must too be a great woman.
great peom!
Sally S.
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4 posted 07-20-99 12:18 AM       View Profile for Sally S.   Email Sally S.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sally S.

I missed this one before....sigh. It's very touching. Lucky girl! (oh....and lucky you too)
seaslady
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5 posted 08-07-99 02:13 PM       View Profile for seaslady   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for seaslady

Yes sea... she is a lucky girl... I hope she appreciates your words...
Sue
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6 posted 08-07-99 02:16 PM       View Profile for Sue   Email Sue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sue

A very lucky girl, to have someone feel like that about her and be able to express it so beautifully.

[This message has been edited by Sue (edited 08-07-99).]
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