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sea_of_okc
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since 1999-06-15
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Oklahoma City, OK, USA

0 posted 1999-06-15 02:51 PM


Age after age on the wheel of time
I have been yours and you have been mine
Our souls once created as a matching pair
Life after life we are destined to share

Time after time in the web of fate
Our threads will meet, will merge, will mate
And course through eternity side by side
Turn after turn you have been my bride

When from this lifetime your soul must part
I will go on with but half of my heart
Knowing that in time we shall love again
It's not a question of if but a question of when

Each turn of the wheel our souls bind together
Heaven will be when that bond lasts forever...

© Copyright 1999 Steven Thomas Seaman - All Rights Reserved
Craig
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since 1999-06-10
Posts 444

1 posted 1999-06-15 04:53 PM


I have seen the future and its looking fairly blue
How are we supposed to compete with guys like you
Your poems make my prattle sound really rank
I bet you’ve got a six pack and money in the bank

I have seen the future and I don’t know what to do
I’m turning green with envy in seven shades and hue
Give up poetry and give the rest of us a chance
Write an epic western or a classical romance

I have seen the future and it isn’t brave or new
I’m getting in the poets bread line form a queue
I have seen the future and it kills me but its true
I have seen a future famous poet and its you

I guess I'll get over it in a year or three! But please, please tell me you don't write this good ALL the time!!!

Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
2 posted 1999-06-15 08:14 PM


Yep - it's true
This one is really quite good.. I must admit...


Genea
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since 1999-06-15
Posts 321
USA
3 posted 1999-06-15 08:29 PM


Very Nice!!
~Genea

Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
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Hurricane Alley
4 posted 1999-06-15 09:04 PM


Welcome! Wonderful poem I'm looking forward to reading more....
sea_of_okc
Senior Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 568
Oklahoma City, OK, USA
5 posted 1999-06-16 10:35 AM


Craig - your response while of different demeanor is as entertaining as my poem

Nan & genea - thank you

Ms. deVine - there will be more, would be some on main pages but Ron stopped at 16th and I first submitted on 18th. Dang!

elvira
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since 1999-07-06
Posts 936
California
6 posted 1999-07-21 03:33 AM


eternal love ... *sigh* ...very beautiful... nice "comment" as well, Craig

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one night at the airport...Childhood Memories...eight short weeks...your countenance...hoarse whispers...My One and Only...Tribute to M.J... serving wench...the mistress...stolen hours... devotion...Master...apart...



Dragon
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since 1999-07-14
Posts 138
Highmount,NY ,USA
7 posted 1999-07-21 03:52 AM


Oh to find a love so true!Bravo!
hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
8 posted 1999-07-21 10:36 AM


Love eternal can it be true
Someone only made for you
If it be true and I find mine
I'll love him till the end of time

Smiles...nice poem. I enjoyed!

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald

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