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invertigo18
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since 06-14-99
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0 posted 06-15-99 02:40 PM       View Profile for invertigo18   Email invertigo18   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for invertigo18

When I look at you it makes me think:
Where did I go wrong?
When I stare at you it makes me think:
If I stare at you too long

Will you hate me?
Will you love me?
Are you always gonna pull and shove me?
I think you feel it too.
I can see it in your eyes.
But you love him and my heart you despise.

Baby
I'm crazy about you.
Baby
I can't live without you.
And sometimes it makes me sad
When I think of what I could've had
If I would've loved you right
I'd still have you now.

The way you look at me girl
Gets under my skin.
And the way that my heart beats girl
I could just sin.

Do you hate me?
Do you love me?
Are you always gonna pull and shove me?
I think you feel it too.
I can see it in your eyes.
But you love him and my heart you despise.

Baby
I'm crazy about you.
Baby
I can't live without you.
And sometimes it makes me sad
When I think of what I could've had.
If I would've loved you right.
I'd still have you now.

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Luke Cakalic
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since 06-15-99
Posts 595
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1 posted 06-15-99 05:16 PM       View Profile for sea_of_okc   Email sea_of_okc   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sea_of_okc

Seems as though these should be lyrics to a song... too bad I have no musical talent
Artic Wind
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2 posted 11-12-2007 09:45 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND
 
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