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invertigo18
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since 1999-06-14
Posts 53
Prairieville, LA., USA

0 posted 1999-06-15 02:35 PM


Dancing with an angel on love and dust.
We make our own music with an instrument of
lust.
Strobe-light making me dizzy as hell.
Or is it just the way you smell?

Now the floor is shaking.
Now the earth is quaking.
As our hearts begin to reawaken.
Dance closer baby
'Cause I think just maybe,
We could dance the whole night away.

Once the shaking's stopped
And the moon has dropped
From its place in the heavens
to the parking lot.
Now you leave me hanging
In this place that's swaying.
All alone as you go home.

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Luke Cakalic

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teenpoet
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since 2001-10-17
Posts 280
Michigan
1 posted 2003-09-09 02:49 PM


I'm sorry for you.  But you wrote about it in a nice sort of way.

Let go of your concept of reality and try mine for a while...then we'll see how long you last.

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