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Challenge: The Fulsome Point Allegory

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James Jaun de la Cruz
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0 posted 06-14-99 08:25 PM       View Profile for James Jaun de la Cruz   Email James Jaun de la Cruz   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for James Jaun de la Cruz

Is Jupter an orange-red rubber ball?
Or is the gas giant a smushy liquid cloud?
Sailing through the rings of Saturn the spaceship Bore-On shutters in anticipation:
In a place where tee equals tee minus one --
A blast from the ast bubbles up the mast.

From port the wind breaks to starboard;
The keel cuts through the bottom space
like ripper-jack cutting into the cheese;
A blue-green haze shadows the bow;
Greeting the sailors stumbling back down.

U B Dumbly echoes into Juno's cave,
"How 'bout some cheer in the rear...,
What did I just see and say?"
Spoken, Sss plus one equals tee;
U B will never see
without Auntie Dictionary
and Uncle Thesaurus.

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WJL
© Copyright 1999 William James Linderg - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 05-01-2002 08:29 PM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

So bizarre, I have to like it!
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