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The Deed's been done

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The gauntlet's been thrown, the step's been made...casted and fired in Hell's domain.
The church's rebuke, the world's rejoice; Internal lament, regretful spite.
No path leads back, no innocence regained; Erotic bliss, religious disdain.
I do not know which to blame...natural lust or disapline spurned; fullfilling want, instruction ignored
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I liked the last line.

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I'm grabbing my hat and coat
I'm leaving the cat a note
Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town!


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