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sig
New Member

since 1999-06-12

Posts 6
Fayetteville, nc, usa

0 posted 1999-06-12 09:25 PM

here I sit, all alone, spirit spent, all things unknown.
Dreams of reality glisten so bright,
but no one knows me nor my plight.
I struggle to see through tear soaked eyes.
With my heart bleeding, not knowing my demise.
Fingers spread, arms stretched out, I wander dumb, def and blind.
I turn and turn and turn about
There is no direction and only doubt
What I want I cannot have.
Waht I hate my body craves.
There's no excape from this tragic gaze.
The blood I had the blood so red has turned cold, dark, and dead.
Where is life, love, joy
Now abondoned forsaken, dispiesed.
Down this path of Hell I'm bound
Going down and loosing ground.
Excape for me is but profound.

ashlerr
Junior Member

since 1999-06-11

Posts 23
chino hills, ca usa

1 posted 1999-06-13 06:54 AM

many a time i have wanted to state a sence of being trapped(for lose of a better word) and yet living within a certain demise. i am not certain what the poem pertains to...but i can tell that it deals with a situation the writer is familiar with and yet at a lose for their own demise. i really enjoyed reading this and i want to see more of your writing.

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

2 posted 1999-06-13 07:24 AM

Welcome, Sig... Nice to see you here.

Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

3 posted 2003-04-13 11:23 PM

I'm just digging through the archives....and reading poetry that was posted the summer of 1999 wishing I could go back to that summer and do it all over again. There is something about this poem that I can understand. That's happened a lot lately. Almost like the authors of these poems can see within my heart.
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

sunst26
New Member

since 2003-05-03

Posts 1
ireland

4 posted 2003-05-03 11:15 AM

hi sig,

your poem touched me to point i could not explain,i have been where you are and understand where your coming from,its a great expression of words and feelings.
hope things have improved since you wrote this piece,take care.

sunst26

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