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sig
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since 06-12-99
Posts 6
Fayetteville, nc, usa


0 posted 06-12-99 09:25 PM       View Profile for sig   Email sig   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sig


here I sit, all alone, spirit spent, all things unknown.
Dreams of reality glisten so bright,
but no one knows me nor my plight.
I struggle to see through tear soaked eyes.
With my heart bleeding, not knowing my demise.
Fingers spread, arms stretched out, I wander dumb, def and blind.
I turn and turn and turn about
There is no direction and only doubt
What I want I cannot have.
Waht I hate my body craves.
There's no excape from this tragic gaze.
The blood I had the blood so red has turned cold, dark, and dead.
Where is life, love, joy
Now abondoned forsaken, dispiesed.
Down this path of Hell I'm bound
Going down and loosing ground.
Excape for me is but profound.
© Copyright 1999 sig - All Rights Reserved
ashlerr
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since 06-11-99
Posts 23
chino hills, ca usa


1 posted 06-13-99 06:54 AM       View Profile for ashlerr   Email ashlerr   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ashlerr

many a time i have wanted to state a sence of being trapped(for lose of a better word) and yet living within a certain demise. i am not certain what the poem pertains to...but i can tell that it deals with a situation the writer is familiar with and yet at a lose for their own demise. i really enjoyed reading this and i want to see more of your writing.
Nan
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Posts 24426
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA


2 posted 06-13-99 07:24 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Welcome, Sig... Nice to see you here.
Justbleu
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since 08-31-99
Posts 3430
Oregon, Originally From Alaska


3 posted 04-13-2003 11:23 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

I'm just digging through the archives....and reading poetry that was posted the summer of 1999 wishing I could go back to that summer and do it all over again.  There is something about this poem that I can understand.  That's happened a lot lately.  Almost like the authors of these poems can see within my heart.  
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

sunst26
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since 05-03-2003
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ireland


4 posted 05-03-2003 11:15 AM       View Profile for sunst26   Email sunst26   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for sunst26

hi sig,

your poem touched me to point i could not explain,i have been where you are and understand where your coming from,its a great expression of words and feelings.
hope things have improved since you wrote this piece,take care.

sunst26
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