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ashlerr
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0 posted 06-11-99 03:21 AM       View Profile for ashlerr   Email ashlerr   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ashlerr

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song, my tempest angel
ring through my clouded breath
tones carry the lyrics of life
to bring the passage of death

oh, sweet melody rapture
i beseech you in respect
bring soitude to its end
with your holy dialect

tear tone notes of chant
blackens the once blue sky
softens my restless spirit
to ease me where i lie

words from unknown gods
sung through sirens lips
enchant this weary soul
buried in death's own crypts

so long, too long ago
was when i heard it last
a tender sorrow tale
that accompanies my past

but now i will sing
and release my heavy chains
so i can live in harmony
beneath the pouring rains

fin.....ash

[This message has been edited by ashlerr (edited 06-11-99).]
© Copyright 1999 ashlerr - All Rights Reserved
Nan
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1 posted 06-11-99 07:17 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Happy to see you with us...


Poet deVine
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2 posted 06-11-99 08:53 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Wow! I like this one! You've got some good imagery here. Welcome to the group!
elvira
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3 posted 08-06-99 01:29 PM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elvira

i hope you are still posting?

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If Haydn is the father of symphonies...And Mozart is the son of symphonies...Then Beethoven is the god of symphonies!!!
JP
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4 posted 08-06-99 01:33 PM       View Profile for JP   Email JP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit JP's Home Page   View IP for JP

Ashlerr,

This goes up there on my top o' the top list. Everything in it worked well and the spirituality was very dear to my heart.

Excellent work.

Ex amino
JP
hoot_owl_rn
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5 posted 08-06-99 07:11 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

well written, welcome to the group

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald
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6 posted 08-06-99 10:40 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

words from unknown gods
sung through siren's lips....

There are many beautiful lines here...and very nicely crafted.
ashlerr
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chino hills, ca usa


7 posted 08-07-99 04:44 PM       View Profile for ashlerr   Email ashlerr   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ashlerr

thank you all very much for the kind words...it is comment like these that keep me writing...i look forward to reading more of everyones work...it keeps the grey matter flowing :-)
Alwye
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8 posted 08-07-99 11:18 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Some very beautiful lines in here...I enjoyed it a lot!!

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*Krista Knutson*

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Dragoness
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9 posted 08-08-99 12:11 AM       View Profile for Dragoness   Email Dragoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Dragoness's Home Page   View IP for Dragoness

This was fantastic!!

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