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Sally S.
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0 posted 06-10-99 11:41 AM       View Profile for Sally S.   Email Sally S.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Sally S.

His name came to me through a gentle summer breeze.
A voice near a whisper. A hearts silent plea.
A magical union powerless through vast space.
Twilight questions of what brought us to this place.

Overwhelming mystery makes it hard to stay away.
A time, a place and where to meet...I would choose the day.
Imprisoned by the longing, fate finally tips his hat.
Four rings you see won't stop us..it's far too late for that.

His eyes capture mine. First kiss ensued thereafter.
I drown within his soul right then...amidst the nervous laughter.
Abundant time was not ours. It ended all too soon.
Brief meetings we shall only have each night amongst the moon.



[This message has been edited by Sally S. (edited 06-10-99).]
© Copyright 1999 Sally - All Rights Reserved
Nan
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1 posted 06-11-99 06:50 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Hi Sally - Glad you could make it...


utrose2
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2 posted 06-12-99 10:53 PM       View Profile for utrose2   Email utrose2   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for utrose2

Sally, this is a beautiful poem. I know the emotions expressed in the poem. Very well said. Thank you.
ashlerr
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3 posted 06-13-99 06:32 AM       View Profile for ashlerr   Email ashlerr   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ashlerr

it strikes me as a forbidden type of occurance. not sure of what nature...but haveing whatever logic within one's self not stopping from making a decision to continue with this brief but intense moment....i liked it very much...having a lot left to the imagination of what exactly brings someone to this point was what i enjoyed most.
Sally S.
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4 posted 06-13-99 11:24 PM       View Profile for Sally S.   Email Sally S.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sally S.

Thank you for the comments. I truly appreciate the feedback..I was beginning to wonder if I still had the talent (giggle).
Lately, my poetry has been my emotional outlet. It's always nice to see someone connect with my work. Thank you again.
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5 posted 06-13-99 11:57 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

happiness, sadness...pleasure, despair...passion and regret...your poem has it all. A fine job.
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6 posted 11-25-2003 09:47 AM       View Profile for Brad Majors   Email Brad Majors   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Brad Majors

woonderfully done
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7 posted 11-25-2003 01:47 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Sally~
I am SO glad that Brad bumped this~

You are sorely missed here my dear lady~
Hope you can come in and see us over the holidays~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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