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A Wedding Vow

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Nectar
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0 posted 06-09-99 01:22 PM       View Profile for Nectar   Email Nectar   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nectar

Captivating my whole
You stepped through a door
Never opened
Never found
Walking lightly into my heart
You bore burdens
That have no consequence
With me
Here you are
Ever burning, ever-glowing
Filling the emptiness
That once threatened to consume me
I canít help but want you
I canít help but need you
So I throw practicality away
And fall senselessly in love
Three small words
So simple
So deep
At the root of who I am
At the root of who you are
At the root of who we will be
As I love you
eternally
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Nan
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1 posted 06-09-99 02:53 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan


Nice to see you here, Nectar...

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Gave me goosebumps there at the end! Great poem! Welcome aboard!
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TGTBH

(Too Good To Be Hidden - at the bottom..up you go!)
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4 posted 07-26-99 07:26 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

This really is TGTBHATB! Very emotional.
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