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Enotneicna
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since 1999-06-06
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Oakland, Or, USA

0 posted 1999-06-07 12:47 PM


Springtime is borne on your voice,
Your laughter brings the flowers to bloom.

Summertime resides in your touch,
A warmth to rival the rays of the sun.

Autumn's colorful swirls abound,
In the sweet, dizzy afterglow of your love.

And icy blue sparkle fo Winter,
Is found in the depths of your eyes.

You are the seasons of my love,
Without you.....

Spring would not bring rebirth,
The Summer sun would not burn.
The colors of Autumn would all be gray,
And Winter would no longer a wonderland be.

Sharon Lee Rotondi
(Enotneicna)

[This message has been edited by Enotneicna (edited 06-07-99).]

© Copyright 1999 Sharon Lee Wilcox (Enotneicna) - All Rights Reserved
Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
1 posted 1999-06-23 10:52 PM


Taking my own advice to move to the 'back' of the poetic line here. I stumbled on this poem, somehow unread! This is very good! I love the line "you are the seasons of my love"

Nice work! Glad I went back to find this.

Christina Myers
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since 1999-06-21
Posts 159

2 posted 1999-06-23 10:54 PM


so am I.... I too throughly enjoyed it...
it captured a few things that I've been trying to say, myself!

Brava

-c

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