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Masked Intruder
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Iíve consecrated my life
To the construction and destruction
Of this unhealthy union
As the self-amputated members
Begin to discover their errors
The sun sets black on a darker sky
No fiery impulse coming from the colder climates
Seeks to renew this burning blood
I stole this body, this head, these arms
That I use to murder them in their beds
Beds of scarlet hyacinth burning blood
As they move closer and closer still
To their grave, grave doubts befall them
They deny it, but deserve it not,
This indoctrinated drama of burning blood
I will not equivocate, I will not excuse
I will not flee to the North Star
I will be heard
The divorce of greatness, the incompatible tempers
Befalls me, follows me
All night, all night forever
© Copyright 1999 Philip Zemler - All Rights Reserved
Nan
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Front and Center, Raccoon......
How come this poem had no response??
Hey you guys - Masked Intruder is a great poet!!!
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2 posted 07-10-99 05:45 PM       View Profile for thursdayschild   Email thursdayschild   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for thursdayschild

very effective poem, full of emotion without
sentimentality. intense imagery, great use
of alliteration...excellent work!
 
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