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Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley

0 posted 1999-05-26 10:05 PM


Life is an Etch-a-Sketch
It's all in what you make it
Sometimes you have to
Pick up your life
and shake it!!!!!


© Copyright 1999 Poet deVine - All Rights Reserved
Lucie
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since 1999-06-20
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Houston
1 posted 1999-06-21 03:38 PM


I LIKED THIS POEM.. SHORT AND TO THE POINT.... HEHE

Genea
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since 1999-06-15
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2 posted 1999-06-21 03:51 PM


Poet,

cute one with a message!!

~Genea

Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
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Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA
3 posted 1999-06-21 04:53 PM


Zits and now an etch-a-sketch. You simply HAVE to change your medication. I love it! You're great!
Fred Hobbs
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since 1999-06-08
Posts 329
Tallahassee, Florida, US
4 posted 1999-07-21 09:39 PM



If only that was all it takes
Just give your life a few good shakes
But I need verse, a metered line
From this poet named deVine

sandman



Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow
5 posted 1999-07-21 09:54 PM


wow, what a talent lies in Poet deVines mind. Dont shake that toy to hard, we would'nt want you to erase your brilliant ability to entertain us delightfully.
wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22
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TEXAS (it's all big)
6 posted 1999-07-21 09:56 PM


hows this for short to the point: im all shook up
DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396

7 posted 1999-07-21 10:08 PM


Does quaking in my boots count?

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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
DreamEvil©



Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
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In the space between moments
8 posted 1999-07-21 10:17 PM


Very cute!! I like it a lot, deVine!

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*Krista Knutson*

"It's a crazy thing, fate has perfect wings..."-Deanna Carter

Menage Numero Trois
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since 1999-07-20
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Zee South of France
9 posted 1999-07-21 10:48 PM


WOOOHOO you go girl!
this was awesome, I agree totally!!!!!
#3


Ohme
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since 1999-07-17
Posts 816
Texas
10 posted 1999-07-21 10:52 PM


And there is no end to the number of times you can shake and erase and start all over again.
Princess Lily
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since 1999-07-13
Posts 149
USA
11 posted 1999-07-26 11:59 PM


WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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We see only what we want to see~unless perhaps~we believe



aziza
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since 2006-07-09
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
12 posted 2007-06-01 04:50 AM


So true -- made me smile as it is short, sweet, and wonderful.  A small package of poetry.

A

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16
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Realm of Supernatural
13 posted 2007-11-12 08:53 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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