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Poet deVine
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0 posted 05-26-99 10:05 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Poet deVine

Life is an Etch-a-Sketch
It's all in what you make it
Sometimes you have to
Pick up your life
and shake it!!!!!

© Copyright 1999 Poet deVine - All Rights Reserved
Lucie
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1 posted 06-21-99 03:38 PM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lucie

I LIKED THIS POEM.. SHORT AND TO THE POINT.... HEHE
Genea
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2 posted 06-21-99 03:51 PM       View Profile for Genea   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Genea

Poet,

cute one with a message!!

~Genea
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3 posted 06-21-99 04:53 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Zits and now an etch-a-sketch. You simply HAVE to change your medication. I love it! You're great!
Fred Hobbs
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4 posted 07-21-99 09:39 PM       View Profile for Fred Hobbs   Email Fred Hobbs   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Fred Hobbs's Home Page   View IP for Fred Hobbs


If only that was all it takes
Just give your life a few good shakes
But I need verse, a metered line
From this poet named deVine

sandman


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5 posted 07-21-99 09:54 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

wow, what a talent lies in Poet deVines mind. Dont shake that toy to hard, we would'nt want you to erase your brilliant ability to entertain us delightfully.
wayoutwalt
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TEXAS (it's all big)


6 posted 07-21-99 09:56 PM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

hows this for short to the point: im all shook up
DreamEvil
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7 posted 07-21-99 10:08 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Does quaking in my boots count?

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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
DreamEvilŠ


Alwye
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8 posted 07-21-99 10:17 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Very cute!! I like it a lot, deVine!

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*Krista Knutson*

"It's a crazy thing, fate has perfect wings..."-Deanna Carter
Menage Numero Trois
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9 posted 07-21-99 10:48 PM       View Profile for Menage Numero Trois   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Menage Numero Trois

WOOOHOO you go girl!
this was awesome, I agree totally!!!!!
#3

Ohme
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10 posted 07-21-99 10:52 PM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ohme

And there is no end to the number of times you can shake and erase and start all over again.
Princess Lily
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11 posted 07-26-99 11:59 PM       View Profile for Princess Lily   Email Princess Lily   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Princess Lily

WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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We see only what we want to see~unless perhaps~we believe


aziza
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12 posted 06-01-2007 04:50 AM       View Profile for aziza   Email aziza   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for aziza

So true -- made me smile as it is short, sweet, and wonderful.  A small package of poetry.

A
Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural


13 posted 11-12-2007 08:53 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND
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