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Once Upon A Promise

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caroline
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0 posted 09-29-1999 09:59 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for caroline

Once Upon a Promise

Once blessed
By love bestowed
Souls possessed
On destined road

Time passed
And longing grew
Passion vast
Shared by two

Still untouched
Without a face
Fear clutched
At hope's embrace

Once belonged
To you alone
Treasured heart
Is now disowned

Disquietude reigned
On sanguine day
Sad reality
Came to stay

Promises died
In pain prolonged
Heart abandoned
That once belonged

caroline 1999
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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...
© Copyright 1999 Caroline - All Rights Reserved
hoot_owl_rn
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caroline...this is fantastic.....sad, but so true and real....your talent surely shines through on this piece

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Pepper
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Hoot took the words right out of my mouth.....Caroline really great work....

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Michael
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3 posted 09-29-1999 10:30 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Caroline,
This is sad and powerful, gentle and painful. Very well done.

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Michael Anderson

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caroline
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4 posted 09-29-1999 10:47 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

hoot, Pepper & Michael...thank you so much.

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...
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5 posted 09-30-1999 12:18 AM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Don't count on me to disagree. This is excellent, Caroline!
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6 posted 12-04-1999 10:37 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

To the top!
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I love the poem.  I am new to the forums, but I look forward to reading more of your poems.  

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