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Dream Gazing

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RobertB
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since 09-26-1999
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Champaign, IL


0 posted 09-29-1999 08:12 PM       View Profile for RobertB   Email RobertB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for RobertB

Dream Gazing

Of dreams unended
and expounded upon
scattered across
our canopy of thought
collected together
as constellations connected by
a shared reality
in view of achievements
from followed dreams
wished on like falling stars
burning brightly into the imagination
of the collective consciousness.


RB

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.
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hoot_owl_rn
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Your style is very unique, I like it and I like the suttleness of your messages

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Denise
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Yes, I like this style too. Very nice piece.

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Denise
suicidal dreams
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good style. your poems are all interesting.

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RobertB
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4 posted 09-29-1999 09:26 PM       View Profile for RobertB   Email RobertB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RobertB

gosh...I thought I had no style being a self-taught poet. I learned the hard way. Thanks you guys I really appreciate your comments.

RB

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.
passing shadows
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