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Mental War

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fazewon
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since 09-28-1999
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0 posted 09-29-1999 06:14 PM       View Profile for fazewon   Email fazewon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for fazewon

thousands of pictures and thoughts
coming together like a collage
it's up to me to sort them out
piece them together and figure them out
discard the ones frightful to my nature
animal insticts remember love thy neighbor
try to follow the laws which govern my mind
but even this place is home to beasts
who feed on fear and attachments
planting seeds in the subconscious
fertilized and nourished by outside distractions
growing feeding distorting thought transactions
driving me to the brink of insanity
everything's fine on the outside
but mentally I've gently
been beaten to death

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hoot_owl_rn
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Very deep and well written

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Very well done.

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