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The Coronation

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H. Arlequin
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0 posted 09-29-1999 04:50 PM       View Profile for H. Arlequin   Email H. Arlequin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit H. Arlequin's Home Page   View IP for H. Arlequin


The Coronation


Late summer will spread its resplendent canopy,
the sun's rays lasering a prismatic display
igniting nuances of color in each tree,
mind-boggling sated eyes, Fall beauty has its day!

Crimson reds and russets, yellow gold from the churn,
azure blue of the sky, orange fire soon to burn,
chlorophyll emeralds, different shades of brown,
so dazzling a melange, is autumn's brief renown.

Beautiful, her last days, more lovely in some ways
than the Spring's explosion of new life; she conveys
dignity's awareness of a cycle that's blessed,
abundant, prosperous, regaling before rest.

Hosannah, Deity, this grandiose largesse
yearning eyes lived to see, Fall's multicolored dress,
for the sun whose brilliance highlights a gaudy scene,
for Mother Nature's coronation of her queen!


--H. Arlequin
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Poems From the Goober Tree http://nathoo.wustl.edu/goober_tree.htm

© Copyright 1999 H. Arlequin - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 09-29-1999 05:25 PM       View Profile for PhaerieChild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PhaerieChild

This is beautiful!! I'll never look at Autumn the same way again!

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2 posted 09-29-1999 05:29 PM       View Profile for doreen peri   Email doreen peri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for doreen peri

dp APPLAUDS!
Sunshine
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3 posted 09-29-1999 05:32 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

This has the deep, romantic posture of "old poetry...", the kind that lived before us, and lives on.

Very well done, Sir. My thanks.
Denise
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4 posted 09-29-1999 08:39 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

As beautiful as the season itself! My favorite time of year!

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Denise
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5 posted 09-29-1999 08:41 PM       View Profile for suicidal dreams   Email suicidal dreams   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suicidal dreams

Very nice poem it has good use of imagery.

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6 posted 09-29-1999 08:45 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

H., may I say that this is breathtaking! You paint a very pretty picture here

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H. Arlequin
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7 posted 09-30-1999 01:07 AM       View Profile for H. Arlequin   Email H. Arlequin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit H. Arlequin's Home Page   View IP for H. Arlequin

tx wildchild, doreen, sunshine, denise, sd and caroline for the kind words and the gift of your time in making them, smooooooooches all!!

HA
 
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