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Eyes of a friend

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Roger Leewright
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Beaverton, OR.USA


0 posted 09-29-1999 01:23 PM       View Profile for Roger Leewright   Email Roger Leewright   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Roger Leewright

Eyes of a friend

I see your eyes as you try to hide them,
Knowing the feelings that burns inside.
Sensing the desire from across the room,
Knowing your afraid to face the truth.

You think you are alone in this,
As you sneak your clever peek.
I brave the chance to talk to you,
A kiss I really would like to sneak.

I act so confident in front of you,
You seem so captured by my way,
Could you possibly feel the way I do?
Can your eyes see the love I try to display?

How I long to feel you hand in mine,
To be understood by loving embrace.
For our bodies to intertwine,
For itís ecstasy that I chase.

If only your eyes could see the truth,
Could I have more than friendship from you?
For you have made my wish come true,
Your beautiful eyes have brought me to you.

© Copyright 1999 Roger Leewright - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 09-29-1999 01:25 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Very nice... I like!
INclan
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2 posted 09-29-1999 01:26 PM       View Profile for INclan   Email INclan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for INclan

Good poem and A nice contrast to the other you just posted....are you getting into trouble now? Making bad decisions? Marrying too young?

Inclan
Dark Angel
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3 posted 09-29-1999 05:58 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

I like this Roger, very nice

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Pepper
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4 posted 09-29-1999 06:07 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

lovely Roger.....enjoyed the read

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
Isis
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5 posted 09-29-1999 06:25 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Great job!! Enjoyed it..

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A hero is a man who does what he can.
~Isis~
(The Fragile Rose)


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