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Untitled 6 (couldnt think of one )

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Ayla
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0 posted 09-29-1999 12:55 PM       View Profile for Ayla   Email Ayla   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ayla

An ordinary night.
but somewhat special.
This man sat alone,
like many others had
done so before.
But tonight was different.
He had something
important to do.
Slowly,he raised
the instrument in his hands.
With a musician's grace,
he started playing.
Filling the air with
a sweet but sad melody.
The familiarity in the music
was too much to bear.
He finishes the last note
just as a tear dropped.
No music in the world
could hide his sorrow and pain.
His heart ached with every note played,
yet he feels a special kind of connection.
He could feel her presence,
could almost see her sitting
on their favorite rock.
But the past is gone
and tomorrow must come.
Whispering one last word
before he left.
"Happy Birthday my love.."


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The heart is happiest when it beats for others..
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suthern
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1 posted 09-29-1999 01:27 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

How very sad... but how lovely! Well done!
INclan
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2 posted 09-29-1999 01:27 PM       View Profile for INclan   Email INclan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for INclan

Nicely done...sad and yet sweet.

Inclan
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3 posted 09-29-1999 01:28 PM       View Profile for INclan   Email INclan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for INclan

Nicely done...sad and yet sweet.

Inclan
Ayla
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4 posted 09-29-1999 08:49 PM       View Profile for Ayla   Email Ayla   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ayla

Thank you Suthern and INclan... : )

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hoot_owl_rn
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5 posted 09-29-1999 08:54 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Beautifully haunting in it's sadness....i could hear those notes of longing played from his lips in notes for only her...wonderful!

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6 posted 09-29-1999 09:26 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Beautiful and very well done!

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Denise
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7 posted 09-29-1999 11:29 PM       View Profile for Ayla   Email Ayla   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ayla

Thank you hoot and dsnyder..I appreciate your kind comments.. : )

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