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Alone Again (Challenge from Isis)

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Marilyn
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0 posted 09-29-1999 11:05 AM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Marilyn

Just looking around me,
At peace with the sight.
The beauty I see,
Has no difficult plight.

At rest is my soul,
What else can I ask
This was the goal,
I was up for the task.

A breeze stirs the leaves,
And rain now does threaten.
I feel no one grieves,
As my lawn gets a wettin.

The emotion once swirled,
At peace I now be.
Content with the world,
And the one who is me.


I threw this together on my coffee break. Once challenged my mind wouldnèt stop working. Thankyou Isis for the challenge.
© Copyright 1999 Marilyn - All Rights Reserved
Michael
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1 posted 09-29-1999 11:49 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Very well done for a coffee breaker.
As all your work does, this has a smoothe flow to it. Nicely done.

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2 posted 09-29-1999 11:55 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Who says breaks are wasted time... besides my boss? *G* Well done!
Marilyn
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3 posted 09-29-1999 05:27 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

Thankyou both for your comments. suthrn tell your boss that while the hands are idle the mind still races...lol.
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enjoyed this much Marilyn.....

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
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5 posted 09-29-1999 10:21 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Ah, that we could all be content with the world and all that is me (us?). Very good. I think you need to take more coffee breaks!
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6 posted 09-29-1999 10:25 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

Pepper...Thankyou.


Poet...Make my life a coffee break!! LOL. I am glad you liked it. Means a lot to me. I am in awe of your work.
 
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