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ThUnDeRkYsS
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0 posted 09-29-1999 03:24 AM       View Profile for ThUnDeRkYsS   Email ThUnDeRkYsS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for ThUnDeRkYsS

When does it end
this pain so great
where is a friend
whos hand to take

Things meant to be
actions take course
just want to be free
not filled with remorse

Times of the past
forever seem real
how long will it last
this black that I feel

Please take it away
erase from my heart
please show me the way
please Lord, press restart

I cry and I shake
as they rise to the top
these smiles I fake
dear heart, please soon stop.

You once stole my breath
I felt like a child
I now ache for death
my request has been filed
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Dragoness
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1 posted 09-29-1999 03:48 AM       View Profile for Dragoness   Email Dragoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Dragoness's Home Page   View IP for Dragoness

Wow! Very moving!

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.
Vicki
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2 posted 09-29-1999 04:03 AM       View Profile for Vicki   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Vicki

That was great
Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 09-29-1999 09:34 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Clever enjoyed the read.
Marilyn
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4 posted 09-29-1999 11:07 AM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

Great work. Could feel every word.
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on the threshold of a dream


5 posted 09-29-1999 12:02 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

"press restart"... how often I've wished we could! *S* Great poem!
Michael
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6 posted 09-29-1999 12:15 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Wonderul piece here, you convey your emotion very well. Ditto suthern - oh, to be able to press the "restart" button.

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Michael Anderson

May Darkness find you all through the day.


ThUnDeRkYsS
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7 posted 09-29-1999 09:16 PM       View Profile for ThUnDeRkYsS   Email ThUnDeRkYsS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ThUnDeRkYsS

Thank you all for your replies... They are greatly appreciated This is how I feel sometimes, over guess what ??? lol The evil, darkness of lost... well, you know
Denise
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8 posted 09-29-1999 09:19 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Wonderful!

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Denise
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9 posted 01-04-2003 04:44 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

sad...I know the feeling
 
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