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Eternal Kiss (Challenge)

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Tara Simms
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since 08-12-99
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Honea Path, SC USA


0 posted 09-29-1999 01:30 AM       View Profile for Tara Simms   Email Tara Simms   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Tara Simms's Home Page   View IP for Tara Simms


Eternal Kiss

I want to make love to you…
show you what words cannot express.
Reveal my vulnerable side,
emotions no longer reigned in.

I want to own you,
the way you own me.
I need to possess you
body, mind and soul.
Let’s take this connection
to the next level,
Beyond the physical
to the spiritual.

Our skin gets in the way,
Preventing me from getting
As close as I need.
I want to feel our souls
touching
connecting
merging
into one.

Make love to me,
Slow, sweet love.
Let every touch, every sound
Be an expression of our devotion,
Pure in motive.

Look at me,
See me!
My essence is ready
for your discovery.

I can see myself in your eyes,
They tell me I am beautiful,
adored.
The light in your eyes
brings tears to mine.

If I close my eyes
I can feel your caress,
even though you have
yet to touch me.

An out of body experience,
I watch our
souls
as they
embrace
in eternal kiss.
******


This is in response to a challenge on making love.




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It matters not how strait the gate;
How charged with punishments the scroll;
I am the master of my fate:
I am the captain of my soul.
--W.E. Henley
Visit my poetry website: www.geocities.com/Paris/Musee/9954/


© Copyright 1999 Tara Simms - All Rights Reserved
DreamEvil
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since 06-22-99
Posts 2442


1 posted 09-29-1999 01:34 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

You have done well with this challenge, Tara. The depiction is breathtaking.

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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©

Systematic Decay
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since 09-15-99
Posts 1312
That place with padded walls a


2 posted 09-29-1999 01:43 AM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Systematic Decay

Wow, great poem, I definitely have the opinion that making love is much different than simply having sex, and you have captured the esscence of it here. Not that I'm all that knowlegeable in this area.

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-
Julie Jordan Scott
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since 09-19-99
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3 posted 09-29-1999 01:45 AM       View Profile for Julie Jordan Scott   Email Julie Jordan Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Julie Jordan Scott's Home Page   View IP for Julie Jordan Scott

Tara, in your words I can feel your feelings, understand your longing, acknowledge the deeep longing and desires you feel.

Sensual, torrid, yet a little uneasy as well.....lets see where this is going....shall we?

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Julie Jordan Scott is a Freelance Writer and Public Speaker,
but her favorite role is that of Mommy! Visit her website at
http://www.5passions.com
Severn
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4 posted 09-29-1999 02:09 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Wonderful! Especially the bit about getting rid of skin. Well done, Tara.
Dragoness
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5 posted 09-29-1999 02:25 AM       View Profile for Dragoness   Email Dragoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Dragoness's Home Page   View IP for Dragoness

Beautiful expression of making love!

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.
rascalx
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since 08-25-99
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Florence, SC, USA


6 posted 09-29-1999 02:50 AM       View Profile for rascalx   Email rascalx   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit rascalx's Home Page   View IP for rascalx

a beautiful and vivid description of longing and desire for that perfect sexual mate. I know those feelings all too well. Thanks for giving them a voice.
Dark Angel
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since 08-04-99
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7 posted 09-29-1999 09:13 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Tara, a wonderful poem well done, especially loved ......Our skin gets in the way,
Preventing me from getting
As close as I need.
I want to feel our souls
touching
connecting
merging
into one.



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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 09-29-1999 09:39 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Tara,
You have touched me without touching me.
Well done.
Iloveit
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9 posted 09-29-1999 09:44 AM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

often I have marveled at the power of a kiss, between two lovers, and you have captured it beautifully, great job! I love the way you open yourself totally and find acceptance and love....sigh

[This message has been edited by Iloveit (edited 09-29-1999).]
Pepper
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10 posted 09-29-1999 10:00 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

gorgeous Tara....sigh

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
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11 posted 09-29-1999 10:07 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Tara....a beautiful expression
Michael
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12 posted 09-29-1999 12:04 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Exquisite and sweet, Tara,
Wonderfully done.

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Michael Anderson

May Darkness find you all through the day.


Tara Simms
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Honea Path, SC USA


13 posted 09-29-1999 10:21 PM       View Profile for Tara Simms   Email Tara Simms   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Tara Simms's Home Page   View IP for Tara Simms

Thanks guys. I love how a great conversation with a friend can inspire me!

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It matters not how strait the gate;
How charged with punishments the scroll;
I am the master of my fate:
I am the captain of my soul.
--W.E. Henley
Visit my poetry website: www.geocities.com/Paris/Musee/9954/


Poet deVine
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since 05-26-99
Posts 25869
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14 posted 09-29-1999 10:25 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

OMG! Tara, you've created a lovely definition and explanation of a kiss that is eternally true and divine...
caroline
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since 08-16-99
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15 posted 09-29-1999 11:10 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Perfection, Tara.

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...
Justbleu
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since 08-31-99
Posts 3430
Oregon, Originally From Alaska


16 posted 09-30-1999 12:13 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

Making love is so very special and you portrayed that beautifully here!! Well Done!!

Bridgette

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"It may take a boy to turn a girl's head, but it takes a man to turn a girl's heart"


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