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Open Poetry #2

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CSwtThng
Member

since 1999-07-28

Posts 124

0 posted 1999-09-29 01:22 AM

I couldn't take it anymore
Slowly opened up the door

I was scared to walk away
Yet, I knew I couldn't stay

Just leave it all behind
A broken heart, a clouded mind

A love unrequited
Such darkness uninvited

A slight inclination
To leave an explanation

Should I let them know
The reason I must go

So quick to hold a grudge
Must they be so fast to judge

Is this some great sin
Hiding feelings deep within

Marilyn
Member Elite

since 1999-09-26

Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada

1 posted 1999-09-29 01:29 AM

Swt....A life of hiding things within will only harn you. I don't know your situation or of whom you write. What i do knnow is things can not get better unless you sit down and talk openly. Be open minded as well as patient. State your points and listen to theirs. Do not let your emotions become inflamed and if they do become inflamed take the time to calm before speaking. Words thrown in anger only do more damage. I feel in your words the want to change things. The only way that is accomplished is though honest communication by both parties.

Chin up...it can only get better.

CSwtThng
Member

since 1999-07-28

Posts 124

2 posted 1999-09-29 01:33 AM

Thanks for your concern. I've learned over the years, that you should wait until you've cooled down before trying to talk about the situation.

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