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Lynn
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since 1999-09-20
Posts 316
Jasper, Alabama U.S.A.

0 posted 1999-09-28 10:45 PM



Only You


I want to speak to your heart,
and tell it how mine feels.

I want to speak to your eyes,
and tell them what mine see.

I want to whisper in your ear,
the silence of my tongue.

I want to kiss your mouth,
and indulge in the passion.

I want to lay beside you,
and spend eternity being next
to only you.


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"I Believe we are divine by nature." -Jewel

"Some people react physically to the magic of poetry, to the moments, that is, of authentic revelation, of the communication, the sharing, at its highest level....A good poem is a contribution to reality. The world is never the same once a good poem has been added to it. A good poem helps to change the shape and significance of the universe, helps to extend everyone's knowledge of himself and the world around him." -Dylan Thomas (1913-1953)


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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
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Hurricane Alley
1 posted 1999-09-28 10:47 PM


The italized words make for hard reading!

Richard 33
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since 1999-09-09
Posts 187
glen easton, wv usa
2 posted 1999-09-28 11:00 PM


I think I am in love......(wink) very good
very good indeed, I loved it, so passionate!!
Oooo baby!!!!!!

Lynn
Member
since 1999-09-20
Posts 316
Jasper, Alabama U.S.A.
3 posted 1999-09-29 12:43 PM






Richard33....Thank you so much for responding. I appreciate it a whole lot. I am kinda new at the whole poetry writing thing, and I really value every ones opinions. Thanks again.

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"I Believe we are divine by nature." -Jewel

"Some people react physically to the magic of poetry, to the moments, that is, of authentic revelation, of the communication, the sharing, at its highest level....A good poem is a contribution to reality. The world is never the same once a good poem has been added to it. A good poem helps to change the shape and significance of the universe, helps to extend everyone's knowledge of himself and the world around him." -Dylan Thomas (1913-1953)


Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
4 posted 1999-09-29 12:47 PM


Beautiful my friend, if only you could tell him... Great job!

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A hero is a man who does what he can.
~Isis~
(The Fragile Rose)



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