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Lynn
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Only You


I want to speak to your heart,
and tell it how mine feels.

I want to speak to your eyes,
and tell them what mine see.

I want to whisper in your ear,
the silence of my tongue.

I want to kiss your mouth,
and indulge in the passion.

I want to lay beside you,
and spend eternity being next
to only you.


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"I Believe we are divine by nature." -Jewel

"Some people react physically to the magic of poetry, to the moments, that is, of authentic revelation, of the communication, the sharing, at its highest level....A good poem is a contribution to reality. The world is never the same once a good poem has been added to it. A good poem helps to change the shape and significance of the universe, helps to extend everyone's knowledge of himself and the world around him." -Dylan Thomas (1913-1953)

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Poet deVine
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1 posted 09-28-1999 10:47 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

The italized words make for hard reading!
Richard 33
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I think I am in love......(wink) very good
very good indeed, I loved it, so passionate!!
Oooo baby!!!!!!
Lynn
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Richard33....Thank you so much for responding. I appreciate it a whole lot. I am kinda new at the whole poetry writing thing, and I really value every ones opinions. Thanks again.

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"I Believe we are divine by nature." -Jewel

"Some people react physically to the magic of poetry, to the moments, that is, of authentic revelation, of the communication, the sharing, at its highest level....A good poem is a contribution to reality. The world is never the same once a good poem has been added to it. A good poem helps to change the shape and significance of the universe, helps to extend everyone's knowledge of himself and the world around him." -Dylan Thomas (1913-1953)

Isis
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Beautiful my friend, if only you could tell him... Great job!

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A hero is a man who does what he can.
~Isis~
(The Fragile Rose)


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