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Sunshine
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0 posted 09-28-1999 10:36 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Never Tomorrow

And what do you mean to me

when there is the dark antiquity

of yesterday ~~

this is not a train of thoughts

but studied questions

~~~~~~~~reaching~~~~~~~~

for unattainable answers from

the passages of time

since yesterday.

It was a long time ago,

that yesterday.

Always with one name.

You will always have one name.

For me.

Like yesterday.

Simple,

basic,

right,

unchanging.

And gone.

Circa Feb. 1970
İKRJ
28 September, 1999


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Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow

© Copyright 1999 Karilea Rilling - All Rights Reserved
Systematic Decay
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1 posted 09-28-1999 10:57 PM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Systematic Decay

Wow, this is a great poem..........
It has extremely stonrg meaning with just a handful of words....

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-
Sunshine
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2 posted 09-29-1999 09:26 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Thank you Sys. As you can see, this was written some years back. For my young age then, I am not objective enough to find that my writing was what I would now call juvenile, as I had expected it to sound. Do I have blinders on?
Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 09-29-1999 10:52 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Sunshine,
You wrote well then and you write better now
*L*
Sunshine
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4 posted 09-29-1999 10:54 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Thank you Sy! You have pleased both my 18 and 47 year old heart!
Michael
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5 posted 09-29-1999 11:17 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Wow, Sunshine.
This quaint little piece cuts right to the core. Powerful work, I loved it.

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Michael Anderson

May Darkness find you all through the day.


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*smiling*
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