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Doc's Dilemma ( sonnets from the 'stute ? )

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Dr.Moose1
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0 posted 09-28-1999 09:28 PM       View Profile for Dr.Moose1   Email Dr.Moose1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dr.Moose1

Pablo's in the 'stute , is he here by chance ?
Painting all the fruit , may I have this dance ?
"Michael's" in there too ,Doc is making rounds .
Spying on " One Flew ", switched to scrubs from gown .
"Kaces" ev'ry one , fueled by excess meds
Brains cooked quite well-done , music in his head .
Lisa's lost her toe ,Cha-Cha Mambo Waltz
Where ? nobody knows , bring the smelling salts !
Vincent's such a dear ,having done too much
He'll lend you an ear , this boy's out of touch !
Ratchet none can stand , keep him out of sight !
Cold of heart and hand , 'till we get him right !
What a motley crew , Ratchet cannot know
Who knows what to do ? she does not Mambo!

A sonnet at start , a recurring theme
Divided into parts , in this place of dreams
What forces that lurk , would Balladeer know?
In here do their work , or is it all show ?
Will mayhem rule all ? no offense is meant
Who answer to it's call , I question intent.
For meanings a-veiled , a most common thing
Abound in this jail , for those who'd be king
I mean institute , if one is to rule
A study in fruit , they must have the tools.
Odd "parings" in verse , perhaps Justin Thyme
What makes matters worse, would rule more benign .
They move things about , such is my belief
I smuggled this out , we can't all be Chief!

© Copyright 1999 William E.Kleist - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 09-29-1999 12:02 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

AHA! Here you are! Be careful, they're all looking for you and they don't look happy either.

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Denise
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2 posted 09-29-1999 04:13 AM       View Profile for The Unknown Poet   Email The Unknown Poet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for The Unknown Poet

Toto, I don't think we're in kansas anymore!


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3 posted 09-29-1999 09:32 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Dr.Moose1,
Well done enjoyed the read.
Justin Thyme
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4 posted 09-29-1999 01:28 PM       View Profile for Justin Thyme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Justin Thyme

Damn, Doc! Cool verse, indeed! I knew you'd come through with a little prognosis of what was really going on in here.
Dr.Moose1
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5 posted 09-29-1999 04:37 PM       View Profile for Dr.Moose1   Email Dr.Moose1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dr.Moose1

Denise , Vinny , and Seymour
Thanks but it looks as if I'll be back in there before long . It's too big out here .
Doc
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6 posted 09-29-1999 04:43 PM       View Profile for Nurse Crachet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nurse Crachet

oh Doc, I knew you'd miss me, and all our fun games we played. I'll be waiting for your return.
Pepper
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I am glad you are all back....or am I? Doctor, if I say I am does that mean I am a little off too ?

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
Dr.Moose1
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8 posted 09-29-1999 05:00 PM       View Profile for Dr.Moose1   Email Dr.Moose1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dr.Moose1

Justin,
My 'puter didn't pick up your reply right away , so thanks . It looks like I'm headed back ...

Rumba ! Cha-Cha Mambo Waltz
Dancing 'neath their baleful glares
Do not like those smelling salts
Out the door and down the stairs

Fresh air freedom open space
Won't be going back there soon
Best stop dancing Justin Kace
Can't distinguish staff from loons

By now they should've missed me
I imagine they have found
The clue that I have left them
So that they could track me down

Not what it's cracked up to be
Of the mark this place falls short
Do not lack for company
I've no problems of that sort

Conversing with new people
Even when no-one's around
Puddle reflecting steeple
Must stay focused on the ground

Visual cacophony
In a moment it should pass
As that side-walk cracks shouldn't be
Lamp-post park-bench refuge grass

Fetal Cha-Cha Mambo Waltz
Full-blown catatonic state
Vaporized conductive salts
Dancing in a jacket , straight
Justin Thyme
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9 posted 09-29-1999 05:21 PM       View Profile for Justin Thyme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Justin Thyme

You just THINK you're out, doc! Hate to be the one to dump the bad news on ya! You're still in here with the rest of us.... hehehe...look behind you! It's me! JT!

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Look behind you, it's me, JT!
You're really still inside.
Those meds can really play some tricks!
Your eyes and ears have lied!

So, sorry, bud, but it is true.
No matter what you see.
I'm glad you THINK you've left the 'stute,
but behind you, it is me!

And I'm still here, paintbrush in hand
just waiting for Van Gogh.
So meet us in the meatloaf line,
then we'll sneak out and go.

HAHA, heehee, I think it's grand
your mind thinks you've gone far!
You think you've gone.... I GUESS YOU HAVE
'cause in your mind, you are...


signed,

Leonardo DaVinci
 
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