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Doc's Dilemma ( sonnets from the 'stute ? )
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Doc's Dilemma ( sonnets from the 'stute ? ) |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Pablo's in the 'stute , is he here by chance ? Painting all the fruit , may I have this dance ? "Michael's" in there too ,Doc is making rounds . Spying on " One Flew ", switched to scrubs from gown . "Kaces" ev'ry one , fueled by excess meds Brains cooked quite well-done , music in his head . Lisa's lost her toe ,Cha-Cha Mambo Waltz Where ? nobody knows , bring the smelling salts ! Vincent's such a dear ,having done too much He'll lend you an ear , this boy's out of touch ! Ratchet none can stand , keep him out of sight ! Cold of heart and hand , 'till we get him right ! What a motley crew , Ratchet cannot know Who knows what to do ? she does not Mambo! A sonnet at start , a recurring theme Divided into parts , in this place of dreams What forces that lurk , would Balladeer know? In here do their work , or is it all show ? Will mayhem rule all ? no offense is meant Who answer to it's call , I question intent. For meanings a-veiled , a most common thing Abound in this jail , for those who'd be king I mean institute , if one is to rule A study in fruit , they must have the tools. Odd "parings" in verse , perhaps Justin Thyme What makes matters worse, would rule more benign . They move things about , such is my belief I smuggled this out , we can't all be Chief! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
AHA! Here you are! Be careful, they're all looking for you and they don't look happy either. ------------------ Denise |
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The Unknown Poet Junior Member
since 1999-09-25
Posts 34Somewhere West of No-Where |
Toto, I don't think we're in kansas anymore! Vinny |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dr.Moose1, Well done enjoyed the read. |
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Justin Thyme Member
since 1999-09-13
Posts 216Oz |
Damn, Doc! Cool verse, indeed! I knew you'd come through with a little prognosis of what was really going on in here. |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Denise , Vinny , and Seymour Thanks but it looks as if I'll be back in there before long . It's too big out here . Doc |
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Nurse Crachet Member
since 1999-09-27
Posts 318They know where I am! |
oh Doc, I knew you'd miss me, and all our fun games we played. I'll be waiting for your return. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
I am glad you are all back....or am I? Doctor, if I say I am does that mean I am a little off too ? ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Justin, My 'puter didn't pick up your reply right away , so thanks . It looks like I'm headed back ... Rumba ! Cha-Cha Mambo Waltz Dancing 'neath their baleful glares Do not like those smelling salts Out the door and down the stairs Fresh air freedom open space Won't be going back there soon Best stop dancing Justin Kace Can't distinguish staff from loons By now they should've missed me I imagine they have found The clue that I have left them So that they could track me down Not what it's cracked up to be Of the mark this place falls short Do not lack for company I've no problems of that sort Conversing with new people Even when no-one's around Puddle reflecting steeple Must stay focused on the ground Visual cacophony In a moment it should pass As that side-walk cracks shouldn't be Lamp-post park-bench refuge grass Fetal Cha-Cha Mambo Waltz Full-blown catatonic state Vaporized conductive salts Dancing in a jacket , straight |
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Justin Thyme Member
since 1999-09-13
Posts 216Oz |
You just THINK you're out, doc! Hate to be the one to dump the bad news on ya! You're still in here with the rest of us.... hehehe...look behind you! It's me! JT! ----------------------- Look behind you, it's me, JT! You're really still inside. Those meds can really play some tricks! Your eyes and ears have lied! So, sorry, bud, but it is true. No matter what you see. I'm glad you THINK you've left the 'stute, but behind you, it is me! And I'm still here, paintbrush in hand just waiting for Van Gogh. So meet us in the meatloaf line, then we'll sneak out and go. HAHA, heehee, I think it's grand your mind thinks you've gone far! You think you've gone.... I GUESS YOU HAVE 'cause in your mind, you are... signed, Leonardo DaVinci |
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