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Dreams When I Wake

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sparkle_or_fade
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0 posted 09-28-1999 09:23 PM       View Profile for sparkle_or_fade   Email sparkle_or_fade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sparkle_or_fade

I woke up, feeling as though,
You were wispering in my ear,
Urging me to start another day.

The sun was shining, the burds,
Singing their song, some of love,
Others of Joy.

My heart is content,
My soul at peace,
My mind rested.

I talked to you last night,
And despite being awake I felt as though,
I was in the place between sleep and wake.

I went to sleep unwillingly,
Not wanting to lose one word,
That you would say to me.

And even now as I sit awake,
Fully aware of things around me,
I still feel caught in my dream.

I think of you, when I wake,
And you're my dreams,
My dreams when I wake.

This was also written by the same guy, who is very close to me. Have a read and tell me what you think, thanks
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