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Forever eternity

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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 09-28-1999 06:25 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Forevers eternity The windless winds of yesteryear
Blow soundless to my phantoms ear.
The snow, the rain, the mornings sun,
The pain, the tears, the times of fun.

They touch me like a second wife.
They move me in a second life.
They fill me full of hopes and fear,
As much today as yesteryear.

The windless wind and soundless sounds,
The silent laughters ghostly rounds,
Embrace me in a shawl of space.
A spaceless space and timeless place.

A place where tolls a timeless bell
Of places that I used to dwell.
Of candy sweet and bitter lies,
Forever and it never dies.

A coexisting life of me,
A taste of my eternity.
© Copyright 1999 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
RainbowGirl
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1 posted 09-28-1999 07:10 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Seymour: That sounds so very sad..

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

Isis
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2 posted 09-28-1999 07:15 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Seymour, so sad a poem my friend. Wish I had the answers too..

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~Isis~
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Denise
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3 posted 09-28-1999 07:26 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Memories can be sweet and painful, but they are ours forever. I enjoyed this very much Seymour.

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Denise
Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 09-28-1999 10:44 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Dsnyder,
Thank you *L*
Balladeer
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5 posted 09-28-1999 11:06 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

This one is very well thought out and written, Sy.
Severn
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6 posted 09-29-1999 02:06 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Loooove this!
The windless winds of yesteryear. Wow.
Dark Angel
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7 posted 09-29-1999 09:28 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

WOW !! Seymour,loved it

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 09-29-1999 10:08 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

You three above come off like the three musketeers.
I do enjoy your comments they bring me near to tears.
Marilyn
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9 posted 09-29-1999 11:13 AM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

Seymour. Memories is what will make us immortal. We must in our life, ty to make good ones. Personally I want to be known eternally as a wonderful person...lol. Great work.
Michael
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10 posted 09-29-1999 11:21 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Sweet work, Seymour, this rang like a splendid melody to my ears.

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Michael Anderson

May Darkness find you all through the day.


suthern
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11 posted 09-29-1999 12:00 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Sad but lovely... Well done!
Seymour Tabin
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12 posted 09-29-1999 07:22 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Marilyn,
I'm sure you will get your wish thank you for the lovely comment.
Michael,
I love to ring bells, thank you for the gracious comments.
Suthern,
I can always count on you for a kind word my humble thanks.
hoot_owl_rn
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13 posted 09-29-1999 09:16 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Again Seymore...wonderfully written, although I've come to expect no less from you.

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It is better to be silent and be considered a fool, than to speak and remove all doubt.
Seymour Tabin
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14 posted 09-29-1999 11:56 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Hoot,
You are a sweet heart, thank you for the read and comment.
 
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