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Truth Seeker
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0 posted 1999-09-28 05:56 PM


I can see a calm, blue ocean just before the sun goes to bed
I can see the moments I wanted to speak, but nothing needed to be said
I see the snow covered mountains, proud, before a new sunrise
I can see all of this through her eyes

In her I see the adoration and love for me
In her I see things no one else can see
I see the compassion and hope she brings to others lives
I can see all of this through her eyes

I see the wonderful gift God has given to me
Through her, all of the wonderful things He has allowed me to see
For when I look into the eyes of my precious dove
I see myself...through the eyes of Love

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Isis
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1 posted 1999-09-28 09:40 PM


Beautiful Lenny, but can I ask, is it a woman or child to which you refer?

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~Isis~
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Denise
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2 posted 1999-09-28 10:09 PM


Very beautiful! This can be related to a child or a 'beloved'! Very versatile! I like that!

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Denise

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3 posted 2002-02-13 03:58 PM


so much can been seen through the eyes
enjoyed

passing shadows
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4 posted 2003-01-01 04:10 AM


*smiling* I always say it's in the eyes
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