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AliceInWonderLand
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0 posted 09-28-1999 05:38 PM       View Profile for AliceInWonderLand   Email AliceInWonderLand   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for AliceInWonderLand



ALL OF A SUDDEN

All of a sudden, my eyes close
and I finally see inside.
All of a sudden, my eyes open
and I see myself for the first time.

All of a sudden, my mind is
unrestricted and allows in compromise.
All of a sudden, I can sort out all the
confusion that's been lingering on in my mind.

All of a sudden, I am able to
understand what it's all about.
All of a sudden, confidence fills me
and self doubt drains out.

All of a sudden, I can let go
of grudges and start to forgive.
All of a sudden, I realize how good it feels
to get out there and live.

All of a sudden, my heart heals
and I can trust again.
All of a sudden, the chaos that was once
in my life is over and I'm ready to begin.


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White Rabbits and tea sound good to me! .•*•.÷Alice÷.•*•.

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RainbowGirl
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1 posted 09-28-1999 05:47 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Excellent..

HUGS

PS: Why the "Read me"?

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

Sunshine
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2 posted 09-28-1999 05:49 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

You sound as if you've had a "sudden" experience! Amazing how fast those things happen.
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