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Evermore My Love

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Mike
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0 posted 09-28-1999 04:30 PM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Mike

I take you gently in my arms,
...and feel your warm embrace,
As light of heaven's stars above,
...shines down upon your face.

I see the glow of all my dreams,
...within your beauty there,
I touch upon moon's silver beams,
...as stroke your silken hair.

I hear sweet music of the Muse;
...we dance til dawn's first light,
Free as the summer winds that blow,
...our hearts as one unite.

You are my goddess of the night,
...you touch within my soul,
And leave therein a satin bloom,
...a rose that makes me whole.

Then sun's first rays steal through the sky,
...morn chases way the night,
You gently place your lips on mine,
...I taste of love's delight.

On rising mist you float away,
...I'll love you evermore,
I whisper softly to the wind,
...I love you evermore.
© Copyright 1999 Mike - All Rights Reserved
Beki
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1 posted 09-28-1999 04:43 PM       View Profile for Beki   Email Beki   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Beki

beautiful!
Sunshine
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2 posted 09-28-1999 05:18 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

This is lovely. I would make a couple of grammatical corrections, but otherwise, the gist welcomes one to love...evermore!
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3 posted 09-28-1999 09:37 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very lovely, Mike. Very wistful, dream-like quality! MORE,MORE,MORE!!!!!!!

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Denise
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4 posted 09-28-1999 09:42 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Mike... one of the loveliest poems I've read......beautiful....you have a rare gift, my friend. It's so nice to read your work! Thank you.
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5 posted 09-28-1999 09:45 PM       View Profile for Saxoness   Email Saxoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Saxoness

yes, very good.
would like to hear more

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot


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6 posted 09-28-1999 09:55 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

Touched a place in my heart. To love evermore. That is my only prayer. Beautiful.
Nan
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7 posted 09-29-1999 10:21 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

This one sings acapella, Mike....
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8 posted 02-13-2002 03:31 PM       View Profile for RosePetal   Email RosePetal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RosePetal

very gorgeous Mike! you possess such talent!
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very passionate
 
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