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Mike
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since 1999-06-19

Posts 2462

0 posted 1999-09-28 04:30 PM

I take you gently in my arms,
...and feel your warm embrace,
As light of heaven's stars above,
...shines down upon your face.

I see the glow of all my dreams,
...within your beauty there,
I touch upon moon's silver beams,
...as stroke your silken hair.

I hear sweet music of the Muse;
...we dance til dawn's first light,
Free as the summer winds that blow,
...our hearts as one unite.

You are my goddess of the night,
...you touch within my soul,
And leave therein a satin bloom,
...a rose that makes me whole.

Then sun's first rays steal through the sky,
...morn chases way the night,
You gently place your lips on mine,
...I taste of love's delight.

On rising mist you float away,
...I'll love you evermore,
I whisper softly to the wind,
...I love you evermore.

Beki
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since 1999-09-15

Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA

1 posted 1999-09-28 04:43 PM

beautiful!

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 1999-09-28 05:18 PM

This is lovely. I would make a couple of grammatical corrections, but otherwise, the gist welcomes one to love...evermore!

Denise

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since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

3 posted 1999-09-28 09:37 PM

Very lovely, Mike. Very wistful, dream-like quality! MORE,MORE,MORE!!!!!!!

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Denise

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since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

4 posted 1999-09-28 09:42 PM

Mike... one of the loveliest poems I've read......beautiful....you have a rare gift, my friend. It's so nice to read your work! Thank you.

Saxoness

Senior Member

since 1999-07-18

Posts 1102
Texas

5 posted 1999-09-28 09:45 PM

yes, very good.
would like to hear more

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot

Marilyn
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since 1999-09-26

Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada

6 posted 1999-09-28 09:55 PM

Touched a place in my heart. To love evermore. That is my only prayer. Beautiful.

Nan

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since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

7 posted 1999-09-29 10:21 PM

This one sings acapella, Mike....

RosePetal

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since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

8 posted 2002-02-13 03:31 PM

very gorgeous Mike! you possess such talent!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
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9 posted 2004-05-30 03:50 AM

very passionate

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