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Did you ever love me?

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miriam
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0 posted 09-28-1999 12:42 PM       View Profile for miriam   Email miriam   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for miriam

your deep dark eyes
I try to answer the question in them.
It was all a disguise,
Why did I fall in love with him.

You told me that you loved me,
You told me that you cared.
Now I can't believe,
I turn around and you're not there.

How am I supposed to give,
After it's all been taken away?
How am I supposed to live,
Without you everyday?

These questions were left unanswered,
I'll never hear from you again.
Now I say a little prayer,
Pray for all my pain.

I loved you more than anything,
But now I'm beginning to see.
Your love for me was a big curse,
Why did you lie to me?


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miriam coronado


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Dark Angel
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1 posted 09-28-1999 06:20 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Miriam, I'm so sorry honey Anytime you want to talk, please don't hesitate. Although sad, I loved your poem.

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


RainbowGirl
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2 posted 09-28-1999 06:28 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Miriam: I wish I could make it better but I can't but I do know that we all fall out of love with someone at some point in our lives but that doesn't detract from the fact that at one point he did love you and maybe still does, only you know the answer to that..

BIG hugs to help a wounded heart

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.



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Isis
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3 posted 09-28-1999 06:53 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

It always hurts Miriam, that feeling of betrayal. Cos that's what he did, betrayed your heart. So Sorry...

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A hero is a man who does what he can.
~Isis~
(The Fragile Rose)


miriam
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4 posted 09-28-1999 11:52 PM       View Profile for miriam   Email miriam   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for miriam

Dark Angel...thank you.
Rainbowgirl...if i knew if his love was true then i wouldn't feel so empty.
Isis...your words are always so comforting.
Marilyn
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5 posted 09-28-1999 11:59 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

I don't believe his love was true. I also do not believe in falling out of love. out of lust, out of infatuation yes, but out of love...NEVER. Love...true love. that is something that can never be left behind. I love many in my life. Not in a romantic way but still love and they will never be deserted by me. Love is patient and kind. EVER present. I am so sorry Miriam, but now you are free to find TRUE love. There is always hope.
Denise
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6 posted 09-29-1999 12:05 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Yes, hope springs eternal, as they say!

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Denise
Zaleha
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7 posted 09-29-1999 05:16 AM       View Profile for Zaleha   Email Zaleha   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Zaleha's Home Page   View IP for Zaleha

Nice poem there.
I really love it.
Keep up the good work....

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RainbowGirl
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8 posted 09-29-1999 05:53 AM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Marilyn: I do agree that 'true love' is a different set of emotions but how often do we find true love?...We can love someone with everything we have but they may change or our needs become different and unmet, people stop trying and sometimes habit can step in...so many different reasons...what I meant by my post was that just because we don't love someone now, doesn't mean we didn't to start with...hope that sounds a little better?

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.



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miriam
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9 posted 09-30-1999 01:59 AM       View Profile for miriam   Email miriam   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for miriam

I found my true love...or so i thought I did. I sort of felt that the "love" he had for me was just lust. I know how to move on and I'm really trying to. I just hate the feeling of being betrayed that's all. I know I found my true love already. I let him go though...If it's meant to be he'll be back. I love him dearly and I tell him everytime I can. Thank you all for your kind words. Just maybe I should tell them to my betrayer so that he knows that people out there can be kind.
passing shadows
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10 posted 01-04-2003 04:46 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

whew! good write
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