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My feelings for you

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Zaleha
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since 09-28-1999
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singapore


0 posted 09-28-1999 06:43 AM       View Profile for Zaleha   Email Zaleha   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Zaleha's Home Page   View IP for Zaleha

I feel so lonely when you left
When will you come back?
Because the moment you left
I started to feel sad

What have happen?
What have gone wrong?
Everything use to be so right
And our love use to be so strong

The moment you step out of my life
I feel so blue
I always cry myself to sleep
Whenever I think of you

I understand everything that you have gone through
And I want nothing from you
It is neither care nor love
But those times we have shared
I just want to say thank you

If you ever find a new one
I am very happy for you
But do remember this
"That I will always stand by you"

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miriam
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1 posted 09-28-1999 12:50 PM       View Profile for miriam   Email miriam   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for miriam

This is a very nice poem...tip of advice (that's what we're all here for) Your poetry inclines more on love in the early years. Why not try the teen poetry forum as well. If not, well...i still like your poetry.
Zaleha
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2 posted 09-29-1999 05:10 AM       View Profile for Zaleha   Email Zaleha   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Zaleha's Home Page   View IP for Zaleha

Thank you miriam.
I appreciate it.
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3 posted 02-13-2002 04:01 PM       View Profile for RosePetal   Email RosePetal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RosePetal

enjoyed your thoughts
passing shadows
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4 posted 01-01-2003 04:09 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

yeah, I see this too
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