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Until there was you

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WonMan4evr
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0 posted 09-28-1999 12:09 AM       View Profile for WonMan4evr   Email WonMan4evr   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for WonMan4evr

Until there was you
I walked this earth alone
No hand to hold in mine
My heart was all my own
Until there was you
True love was just a dream
Dreams of wonderment and fairytail.
Dreams of hope and love
Until there was you
My life had no direction a road of uncertainty but now we have a journey together you and me
So I thank my lucky stars and God from the heavens above
For my heart and soul could never Feel the impact of True love
Until there was you...


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Tara Simms
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1 posted 09-28-1999 12:16 AM       View Profile for Tara Simms   Email Tara Simms   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Tara Simms's Home Page   View IP for Tara Simms

Beautiful sentiment! I would rework the formatting a bit, a few lines get a bit long.

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It matters not how strait the gate;
How charged with punishments the scroll;
I am the master of my fate:
I am the captain of my soul.
--W.E. Henley
Visit my poetry website: www.geocities.com/Paris/Musee/9954/


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2 posted 09-28-1999 12:33 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very lovely!

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3 posted 09-28-1999 01:03 AM       View Profile for Dragoness   Email Dragoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Dragoness's Home Page   View IP for Dragoness

Lovely.

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.
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