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MsLola
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0 posted 09-28-1999 12:04 AM       View Profile for MsLola   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MsLola

Blue

Your eyes
At first,
They looked at me
Long and steady
Then,
They looked into me
Slow and observant
Now,
They look thru me
To my soul
To who I am
To what I will be
They see my fears
They see my joy
They see the things
That I don't want seen
Or want to share with the world
It was scary
The first time I felt it
Now,
I when you look
It's home
It's safe
Your eyes are trusting
Comforting
They are the place
I wish to be.
I want to be,
Looking back
Into your eyes

© Copyright 1999 MsLola - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 09-28-1999 12:32 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Another beautiful, romantic piece! Very well done!

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Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration


2 posted 09-28-1999 12:52 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Welcome mslola, and I can feel where you're coming from...there's a certain someone who's eyes I long to look into...
Dark Angel
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3 posted 09-28-1999 02:48 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

This is beautiful And welcome MsLola

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 09-28-1999 01:48 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Mslola,
The messages are out there today. Good one.
 
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