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Cold Rain-opinions,please?

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Mark4Him@juno.com
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since 09-26-1999
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Whitesboro,NY,USA


0 posted 09-27-1999 11:57 PM       View Profile for Mark4Him@juno.com   Email Mark4Him@juno.com   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mark4Him@juno.com


I am alone before the cold slick window
open in the rain.
I smell the wet roads
and hear the poke-tapping of
the shower through the screen.
Not a peaceful sound but
a desolate depressing noise
that dampens not only the grass but my spirits.
A faint gray light sheens on my face
through the dim square of the window
in the cloudy darkness of the day.
All is cold and isolated
as my heart,
as the day,
is buzzing dully.


-----What?! A two-in-one?!-----


-liquid sorrow-
(a haiku)

shine liquid sorrow
drop from thick tangled eyelash
in painful release


love to all,Melissa!
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Denise
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1 posted 09-28-1999 12:01 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Melissa, absolutely wonderful!

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Denise
Tara Simms
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2 posted 09-28-1999 12:22 AM       View Profile for Tara Simms   Email Tara Simms   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Tara Simms's Home Page   View IP for Tara Simms

I absolutely love the haiku!

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It matters not how strait the gate;
How charged with punishments the scroll;
I am the master of my fate:
I am the captain of my soul.
--W.E. Henley
Visit my poetry website: www.geocities.com/Paris/Musee/9954/


 
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