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Come To Me My Love

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hoot_owl_rn
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Come To Me My Love

Oh come to me my love tonight
Come back to me in dreams
That I might live
Take from me all that is my own
Lend forth your hand
That I might give

Oh come to me my love today
Compared to you the sun
Its presence dim
Whisper my name into my ears
Sung from your lips, your words
Are like a hymn

Oh come to me once more my love
Through miles and time and space
Please flee to me
Break all these bonds we have known
Hold me in your arms tonight
And set me free

Oh come to me my love right now
Space and time will be no more
No moon or sun
Bounds are lost, miles disappear
Nothing left but you and I
As we are one


To Tyson, my inspiration, my muse

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Some people come into our lives and quickly go. Some stay for awhile and leave footprints in our heart and we are never ever the same.

Thank you all for leaving footprints!!
© Copyright 1999 Ruth Kephart - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 09-27-1999 09:58 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

What emotion you have packed into this one, hoot. Excellent!
Tara Simms
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2 posted 09-27-1999 09:58 PM       View Profile for Tara Simms   Email Tara Simms   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Tara Simms's Home Page   View IP for Tara Simms

hmmm, this is beautiful, like a soft song whispered in the night.

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How charged with punishments the scroll;
I am the master of my fate:
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WhtDove
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3 posted 09-27-1999 10:04 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Another wonderful creation Hoot! Very nice!

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God gave you two ears and one mouth...so you should listen twice as much as you talk.
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4 posted 09-27-1999 10:39 PM       View Profile for johnt300   Email johnt300   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for johnt300

No, Ruth. Thank YOU.
Tyson
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Balladeer...thanks, I'm glad you could feel the emotion

Tara...what a beautiful comment...thank you

Whtdove...thanks once more

Tyson...Te etes mon amour, mon lumie`re, mon force, et mon comprenant. Je suis rien sans vous.

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Some people come into our lives and quickly go. Some stay for awhile and leave footprints in our heart and we are never ever the same.

Thank you all for leaving footprints!!
Christopher
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6 posted 09-28-1999 08:28 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Maybe I should just stop writing, and let you say my words for me ruth!
Beautiful..
Chris
hoot_owl_rn
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Oh Christopher...that indeed would be a loss to the literary world, but thanks for the compliment.
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8 posted 09-28-1999 09:05 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Wonderful, Hoot!!
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Beautiful....soft, gentle.....the words falling like a gentle rain.

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.
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10 posted 09-28-1999 10:18 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Hoot....great job as usual.....I wrote one kinda like this yanno?

Come to me my love,
Do not hesitate
I am not funky

Please be mine
Let our hearts entwingle
Like honeysucker

Jump around me
Scuff my boots
Fingerpoke at me

Skippy-Toe by
With owl-growls
And Fa-la-la's

Love with me
All your grits
As I love you

Yassee? I can be serious too yanno!
Pepper
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11 posted 09-28-1999 10:41 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

another lovely Hoot.......

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams
Sally S.
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12 posted 09-28-1999 10:50 AM       View Profile for Sally S.   Email Sally S.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sally S.

Beautiful, Hoot.
It sings....really. A wonderful tribute.

And Toe, geesh.....you never stop....LOL
hoot_owl_rn
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Thanks everyone for your comments about this one...another of those I was unsure about before posting...I'm glad you all liked it, makes me feel better about it

Toerag....you serious...very seldome, but I love your humor
Iloveit
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14 posted 09-28-1999 01:02 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

this is beautiful hoot, will have to echo tara on this one, its like love whispered on the winds to reach a love far away.....

and toe, just loved that skippy toe thing, what a picture of pure bliss lolol
RainbowGirl
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15 posted 09-28-1999 01:15 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Hoot: This was terrific but I don't think I've read anything of yours that wasn't excellent..

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

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16 posted 09-28-1999 01:41 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

ROFL.... whether love whispers and glides into our dreams or skippy-Toes with owl growls... it's grand! *G*

[This message has been edited by suthern (edited 09-28-1999).]
Andrew Scott
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17 posted 09-28-1999 03:15 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

Lady Hoot: A fool he would be, to be anywhere else with words spoken as these.
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