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Beki
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0 posted 09-27-1999 09:47 PM       View Profile for Beki   Email Beki   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Beki

Untitled

If I had never known your love
I might still be content with less,
I might have grown to cherish him
If I'd not known true happiness.

But I have tasted full the joy
Of which the brightest dreams are made.
A flower that has known the sun
Will never learn to love the shade.


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"We read and write poetry because we are members of the human race. And the human race is filled with passion.....the powerful play goes on and you may contribute a verse. What will your verse be?"
--John Keating, Dead Poets Society
© Copyright 1999 Rebecca Reese - All Rights Reserved
Mark4Him@juno.com
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1 posted 09-27-1999 09:53 PM       View Profile for Mark4Him@juno.com   Email Mark4Him@juno.com   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mark4Him@juno.com


Awesome,as I'm beginning to learn is typical for you.I look foward to your poems each time I log on.My favorite,however,was Words and Distance.I can't really help you with a title though-that's my weak point.
Balladeer
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2 posted 09-27-1999 09:54 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Very nice, Beki. How about "No Turning Back"
Marilyn
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This is truely a wonderful piece. I felt it in my heart.

Title suggestion: If
hoot_owl_rn
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Beautiful Beki...what about "In Your Shade"
Skyfyre
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5 posted 09-27-1999 10:06 PM       View Profile for Skyfyre   Email Skyfyre   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfyre

Ummm ... "No Return?"

Titles are not my forte ... most of the time it is just "Here, read this..."

Great as usual ...

Nocht
Beki
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Thank you Balladeer, Nocht, Mark,Marilyn and Hoot....appreciate your comments. I don't usually have a problem with titles but this one for some reason stumped me. I think I like "no turning back" Balladeer, will strongly consider it,thanks for the suggestion. :-)
 
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