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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
Untitled If I had never known your love I might still be content with less, I might have grown to cherish him If I'd not known true happiness. But I have tasted full the joy Of which the brightest dreams are made. A flower that has known the sun Will never learn to love the shade. ------------------ "We read and write poetry because we are members of the human race. And the human race is filled with passion.....the powerful play goes on and you may contribute a verse. What will your verse be?" --John Keating, Dead Poets Society |
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Mark4Him@juno.com Junior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 36Whitesboro,NY,USA |
Awesome,as I'm beginning to learn is typical for you.I look foward to your poems each time I log on.My favorite,however,was Words and Distance.I can't really help you with a title though-that's my weak point. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Very nice, Beki. How about "No Turning Back" |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
This is truely a wonderful piece. I felt it in my heart. Title suggestion: If |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Beautiful Beki...what about "In Your Shade" |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
Ummm ... "No Return?" Titles are not my forte ... most of the time it is just "Here, read this..." Great as usual ... Nocht |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
Thank you Balladeer, Nocht, Mark,Marilyn and Hoot....appreciate your comments. I don't usually have a problem with titles but this one for some reason stumped me. I think I like "no turning back" Balladeer, will strongly consider it,thanks for the suggestion. :-) |
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