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Garden Cycle

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Beki
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Garden Cycle

Young rabbits at play
stop to nibble my daisies -
my wife laughs out loud.

Garden butterfly
alights on the last poppy -
first breath of autumn.

Harsh serrated wind,
rain slices the icy air -
one white blossom tries.

Two fledgling sparrows
practice baby flight-steps -
the roses smile.

Copyright 1999


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"We read and write poetry because we are members of the human race. And the human race is filled with passion.....the powerful play goes on and you may contribute a verse. What will your verse be?"
--John Keating, Dead Poets Society
© Copyright 1999 Rebecca Reese - All Rights Reserved
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Excellent combination of haikus. Well done.
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I'm in that garden in your words
Beki
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Thanks, friends. This poem was published in last July's Snakeskin, a british journal...my first international publication! :-)
Beki
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4 posted 09-28-1999 04:46 PM       View Profile for Beki   Email Beki   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Beki

movin on up.....
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love this!

and love your signature line too!
 
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