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Mark4Him@juno.com
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since 1999-09-26
Posts 36
Whitesboro,NY,USA

0 posted 1999-09-27 09:40 PM


a star showered sky
each tiny sun blazing distantly
winking,signalling clear and white
in the inky black night sky
grass below wet with tears of diamond dew
out of the darkness

trees whisper faintly
leaves shivering like hope
I shiver too,
possessed by the need for someone,
someone I have not yet known

-----by the way,my name's Melissa.Please call me that,I know the username's confusing!

[This message has been edited by Mark4Him@juno.com (edited 09-27-1999).]

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Marilyn
Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada
1 posted 1999-09-27 09:42 PM


Glorious Mark. The hope shines through this one like the loneliness through the other. Brilliant.
hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
2 posted 1999-09-27 09:57 PM


Melissa....beautiful, I can relate
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