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Mark4Him@juno.com
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Whitesboro,NY,USA


0 posted 09-27-1999 09:40 PM       View Profile for Mark4Him@juno.com   Email Mark4Him@juno.com   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mark4Him@juno.com

a star showered sky
each tiny sun blazing distantly
winking,signalling clear and white
in the inky black night sky
grass below wet with tears of diamond dew
out of the darkness

trees whisper faintly
leaves shivering like hope
I shiver too,
possessed by the need for someone,
someone I have not yet known

-----by the way,my name's Melissa.Please call me that,I know the username's confusing!

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Marilyn
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Glorious Mark. The hope shines through this one like the loneliness through the other. Brilliant.
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Melissa....beautiful, I can relate
 
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