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A Pile of Ash
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A Pile of Ash |
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Lynn Member
since 1999-09-20
Posts 316Jasper, Alabama U.S.A. |
All my memories of you have been burned, and now lie in a pile of ash. All but the ones in my heart, mind,and soul. I just wish I could find a way to get rid of them. ------------------ "I Believe we are divine by nature." -Jewel |
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Mark4Him@juno.com Junior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 36Whitesboro,NY,USA |
Makes me want to find whoever hurt you and castrate them!ha ha. I can feel the pain and desolate loneliness. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wonderfully written...my suggestion....throw the askes to the wind and let them blow away...then go on with your life free from soot |
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Lynn Member
since 1999-09-20
Posts 316Jasper, Alabama U.S.A. |
Thank you for the responses. "Maybe soon, a day will come, when I can be cleansed of the memories that haunt me deep inside. Maybe soon, a day will come, when I can be pure once more." ------------------ "I Believe we are divine by nature." -Jewel "Some people react physically to the magic of poetry, to the moments, that is, of authentic revelation, of the communication, the sharing, at its highest level....A good poem is a contribution to reality. The world is never the same once a good poem has been added to it. A good poem helps to change the shape and significance of the universe, helps to extend everyone's knowledge of himself and the world around him." -Dylan Thomas (1913-1953) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
it takes the winds of love to do that |
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