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Lynn
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since 09-20-1999
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Jasper, Alabama U.S.A.


0 posted 09-27-1999 08:42 PM       View Profile for Lynn   Email Lynn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lynn


No More Lies


The night you held me
led me to believe you were mine.
The night you kissed me
sent shivers down my spine.

The time we spent together
gave me hope.
But the time you left me
I couldn't cope.

When the only word you spoke
was a straight lie.
I tried my best to not let
you see me cry.

And when you said "I Love You"
I walked out the door.
Simply because I couln't handle
your lies any more.


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"I Believe we are divine by nature." -Jewel
© Copyright 1999 Jennifer Lynn Bonham - All Rights Reserved
Mark4Him@juno.com
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since 09-26-1999
Posts 36
Whitesboro,NY,USA


1 posted 09-27-1999 08:47 PM       View Profile for Mark4Him@juno.com   Email Mark4Him@juno.com   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mark4Him@juno.com


Good poem,sorrowful and wistful.I love your signature.Jewel is my favorite artist.Have you read her poetry?
Denise
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2 posted 09-27-1999 08:47 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very well written. A relationship just can't exist in an atmosphere of lies, can it?

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Denise
Lynn
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Jasper, Alabama U.S.A.


3 posted 09-27-1999 08:50 PM       View Profile for Lynn   Email Lynn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lynn

Thank you. Yes, I have read Jewel's poetry. I have her book "a night without armor" She s a very big inspiration.

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"I Believe we are divine by nature." -Jewel
hoot_owl_rn
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Glen Hope, PA USA


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Lynn...love with lies is no love at all...I'm glad you figured that lesson out on your own
Hugs
Ruth
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5 posted 09-27-1999 09:28 PM       View Profile for Soleil   Email Soleil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Soleil

Nice. It's always good to put those like that behind you.
Lucie
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Sad poem.. but with the right conclusion!
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