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A Hope Shines Brightly

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Mark4Him@juno.com
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0 posted 09-27-1999 07:21 PM       View Profile for Mark4Him@juno.com   Email Mark4Him@juno.com   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mark4Him@juno.com


No piece of you do I possess
no proof for all my trust.
Not even a picture in my mind's eye are you,
the happiness sure to come.
All that is mine is hope
that shines silvery within.

You are a star in my future,
a hope so distant,
a dream resting on a cloud,
a promise yet unfulfilled.
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Denise
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1 posted 09-27-1999 07:37 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Lovely little poem!

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Denise
Poet deVine
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2 posted 09-27-1999 07:42 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Love the last line...a promise yet unfulfilled! I've had plenty of those!
Paul Allen Lupien
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3 posted 09-27-1999 08:17 PM       View Profile for Paul Allen Lupien   Email Paul Allen Lupien   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Paul Allen Lupien

Wistfully poetic concept-well expressed.

PAL

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hoot_owl_rn
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4 posted 09-27-1999 08:34 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Short and sweet....I like it
WhtDove
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5 posted 09-27-1999 10:26 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

In agreement with Hoot there! This was sweet!

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